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| Iseki 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis little snippet is so in-depth that it could have been torn out of a 30 chapter on-going. I would like to read that one! Very nicely done! the descriptions are fresh, the characters are themselves, and you've just made me want to read more and more. |
| Imadra Blue 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked this piece. It's short and moody, provocative and descriptive. An enjoyable read that could definitely be expanded if you're ever so inclined. :) |
| Sousukes-Girl 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, how about more?? You know you want to expound upon this... You know you wanna... Great little story. I wish it were longer, but I understand the whims of the Muses. Sg |
| Darkened-Skys 2007-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice work. ^^ I think you've done a really good job with this. Can you write more...? I wanna know what happens. |