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Reviews For: White Blue

Iseki
2008-07-09
ch 1,
abuseThis little snippet is so in-depth that it could have been torn out of a 30 chapter on-going. I would like to read that one!

Very nicely done! the descriptions are fresh, the characters are themselves, and you've just made me want to read more and more.
Imadra Blue
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI liked this piece. It's short and moody, provocative and descriptive. An enjoyable read that could definitely be expanded if you're ever so inclined. :)
Sousukes-Girl
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseOh, how about more?? You know you want to expound upon this... You know you wanna...

Great little story. I wish it were longer, but I understand the whims of the Muses.

Sg
Darkened-Skys
2007-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice work. ^^ I think you've done a really good job with this. Can you write more...? I wanna know what happens.
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