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| Aslan's Lamb 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseSo simple. So true. So beautifully written. |
| WickedWitchoftheSE 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseaw, just absolutely precious! i love it! |
| lightsabermaster 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseHow wonderful! I love that you wrote Polly and Digory instead of the Pevensies; it is such a nice change! Nice work. :) -LM |
| Val Evenstar 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseAw - brings back memories of some wonderful dances. This is yet another beautiful piece. It sparkles with Christmas, but it's shadowed by Polly's dilemma. And the promise at the end is so full of hope! Thanks for writing this, and merry Christmas! |
| EstellaB 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is lovely! I think I prefer it to Refinement of a Different Kind, although that's also really good :) You have Polly down pat and perfect-every time I read one of your stories with her in it, she becomes my favourite character (normally it's Eustace) Best line in my opinion: “You keep appearing and disappearing like a genie, makes it difficult to talk to you,” he teased gently with a smile. Polly's embarrasment at being caught with her doll was cute. It was very sweet of Digory not to make a comment. Digory stepping on his partner's feet was funny. Essentially, I loved it-the whole thing! Oh, I wish Lewis had let Digory marry Polly... though I like to think they got a second chance in the Real Narnia. Good to read some CoN stories from you again :D |
| piccolabimba 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! Imagine being caught with a doll. Mortifying. |