PLZ CONTINUE THIS TOO! PM ME!

Cute.

*Sigh* Love this, too. Very hot indeed;-)

Magda

OH MY GOD!DON'T JUST STOP HERE!ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!GAH! *stomps around* I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!you know!now i've got that itch!like those old half-cocked US anime which have announcements at the end of every episode that asks so many questions until you're dying to know what happens next?you know?THAT ITCH!oh for the love of all that's good and holy, please update!

I like it a lot! Varice seems more... grown up and respectable in this than any other fic I've read. Now don't get me wrong, I still hate her guts, but I like it that you added some reality to her character. I really enjoy modern fics, and this one was perfect. I hope you continue, it deserves to have more.

:) ever devoted fan

vitch

So are you ever going to update this, or is it just a oneshot?

*giggle'n'squee*

That's definitely a new take on their relationship, and i applaude your originality. Is there going to be a second part?

Great work!

Keep Rockin'!

Shazzam

cool

I had read this on your blog back when the jacket came out...then I had forgotten all about it!

Yay, Sparrow's back! If only for a little while...

id

numair aint 5 yrs older, hes 16

ok that was slightly strange, but miri was awsome! anyway Daine has to be with numair, Varice can not win! sorry in random mode...

Wowser! So sweet! Is there to be more? There had better be! Hehe! Yay!

hmm... must update