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| Plain White T 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of those cute/sad stories. Even so, I loved it and you have the potential to make this a soild fanfic - not just a drabble (hint, hint)! -Shelby Marie |
| CapitanCatherine 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseAww! Realstic, bittersweet and heartbreaking! Sometimes, you have to wonder whether they were better off as friends..great story, drabble or no! :) |
| Singing Violin 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute and bittersweet, and doesn't really resolve what might happen afterwards, so you could write a sequel. There are just a few little typos and stylistic issues (at one point you write "change" when you mean "chance" and there are some sentences where a word or two could be removed to make it tighter) and technically, a drabble is exactly 100 words long (but it is sometimes used colloquially, as you have here, to mean "very short story" - see the wikipedia entry on drabble if you're interested). |