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burgundy eyes
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
"the intensity of a desire determines its chances of success", that is so very true. when touya wanted to tell yukito what he really was, nakuru always interrupted them, but in episode 65, touya had pushed her out the door. and that shows that he really wanted to give his powers away and not let anything get into the way. great job on this one-shot.
PsychoLeopard
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
That was...interesting. I think it could have been a little deeper, but the simplicity was kind of nice.
Azamiko
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
Woo-hoo!! Go Touya! (He sounds a little like Doumeki here...or maybe, Doumeki is the character evolution of Touya...)
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