Awesome story! One of the best that I have ever read on Fanfiction! Great details and fantastic storyline!! :)

i love how your writing is serious at the right parts, and yet quite witty. gr8 job, this is mi favorite story!

omg! that was like the best piece of writing i have ever read! i have to get a sweater because it brings the chills down mi spine! you are a truly talented author. i think that if u tried to write a book, it would TOTALLY sell! i'd buy it! thus making all mi friends buy the book. and i hav a LOT of friends!

ya i guess that IS safe to say...i mean, come on! It's Derek! i really like how u portray the characters in this story like they are in the show. you make them do things that they might do in the show, instead of totally random things that would TOTALLY not happen! when some people do Dasey fanfics, they change the feel of the characters, mainly derek. but you dont. i hav to say that u r a very creative and accomplished author. i have read quite a few LWD fanfictions, and i really really like this one! im only 12, but hell i've read a LOT! whether it be fanfiction, books, magazines, the paper, im a pretty readalicious teen. im kinda mature for mi age tho. ok ill shut up and let u get on with updating now. *hint hint* ; )

duh duh duh duh! cue the dramatic music!

I Loved This!
haha I cant wait to read the sequel!

Aww, he's still going to jail...eventually. Should have expected that.

Oh and here you have: "A woman by the name of , to come in tomorrow and take a look at her."
By the name of what? You completely skipped over her name.
and an unnecessary comma somewhere else in this chapter but I forgot where

This fan fic is AMAZING.

Seriously, it's about 3:21 AM in my timezone and I don't was to stop reading XD

Love the plot idea! and I'm mad I didn't connect Terrence with the bad guys. I mean, I figured it out when he was first mentioned and then the tape went missing but I forgot after a while... [totally distracted by Dasey

i called that! the moment that derek felt weird about him and the way he was being all suspicious with the phone as they were leaving, i was like HE IS A BAD GUY!

I'm going to be honest. I didn't really like the ending with Casey being pregnant. I'm not going to lie and say it was so sweet and loving but I would have liked to see Casey and Derek just being together. Just them and if there is a sequeal, then Casey be pregnant but not right away. Overall, I loved the story. Great. Awesome. Basically perfect.

It was so romantic when Casey and Derek finally got together and it was adorable when they were joking with each other. I don't like how Derek is going to jail but it has to be realistic and that's what would happen in real life.

Loved it all. I could picture Derek fighting with Mark and pulling the gun on him and standing before him while thinking what to do. I really loved when Derek called out to Terrance and they did what they did. Very awesome. It was an adrenline rush and I liked it when it calmed down at the end with Casey and Derek. It's all her choice.

I love Derek pounding on Mark and him standing up to him. Very brave.

Very exciting and suspenseful. Love it all. I have an idea what will happen. I'll have to read more to see if I"m right. Great job on everything.

I love the ending leaving off when the private investiagtor saying they needed to go over the difinition of stupid. Priceless. This should be really interested in how Derek is going to get Casey out. I have to congradulate you on making this story really realistic with everyone's behavior.