It's so nice to see some SF fanfiction around here. I too like the idea of Fuse and Doll together. Very nice holiday one-shot!

So cute! It's very cliche kind of clever isn't it? I like your writing style- it's very conversationally descriptive, easy to read, without being over simplistic. I think you handle dialogue nicely- the characters don't sound too formal in their speech. I liked the little bit about mistletoe in the end- nice touch!

Aw thats so sweet. Fuse and Doll huh... hehe she is a little "rough" around the edges... just what Fuse needs... great story... SaGa Frontier needs to make a huge come back... i think the fans are dying :( Hopefully your christmas story will bring them back :cheer:

Merry Christmas!