|Reviews for Overshadow: Kirby Against All Odds|
| Kindra Mckleen 1/18/08 . chapter 1
Your story is good, but *isn't there always a but* in the kirby games, kirby is only a baby starwarrior and will always stay that way. This means he can't talk. I can see where you are taking this and the fact that your main character can't talk is kind of lame. Keep up the good work!
| Kaviar 12/15/07 . chapter 1
Well, It's funny. Good job, flamerextinguisher, i LOL'd a few times. Stays true to the spirit of the kirby games. Not PERFECT writing, but it works.