It's so cute! can you continue it...i meen..when hiyono wakes up! :D

nice...
though i'm a bit disappointed because there were no kissing scenes?

aw~ That was so adorable! :) I love it! *two thumbs up*

-Dies from cuteness-

That was absolutely adorable!

Alright that was absolutely adorable, the only word I can use is SQUE! I loved it!

aw... that was so adorable!! *fangirls* write more write more! =D

I really love it, it's so sweet!

It is cute and I love it. thanks for writing it.

very good.. i love it ;)

I will create a livejournal soley to read your stories about Spiral. Ayumu and Hiyono goodness! X3 This is a very nice oneshot.