Totally awesome! I love Tessai in this story (aside from the main characters, of course) because of his understanding and graceful humor about everything. heehee. This was a lot of fun to read. Thank you!

Fhew! This was very good XD nice detail and the end-it made me laugh an giggle, I did very well enjoy it, nice job on this XD.

this was the best lemon i have ever read on history!

/FAVORITES!

was it fun? hecks yes it was fun! i just adore this pairing! now if you could just play nice and continue to write yoruichi and kisuke we will all be happy :P lol

Haha, loved it.

Really nice story. Very hot interaction between two playful and sexy characters. Nice writing!

I don't usually review stories myself, but this one I really adore. I'm curious about the parts you cut out though. I'd like to read them.

Hahaha! It seems Urahara's seduction sort of backfired, huh? >.< I love it!

i usually role play urahara .. but i never thought i would find something so awesome as a background to role play one ...

by itself the story is great .. very well written giving hints and implying things and yet not mentioning them, just keeping them out of reach and where the should be in each individuals imagination ...

great read, was hooked and didnt stop till i was finished ... my yoruichi partner is going to be so surprised when i bring this up .. thanks ... i can jsut imagine the look on her face ... ! she'll get me back for it one day but still .. this is priceless !

HOT.

awesomeness^^

waoh! awesome story lmao ur a good writer

i liked that it made me smile :) lol

HAHAHA I've never laughed so hard in my lifee...followed by an awkward silence when my daughter asked me what I was laughing about xD I would totally have fun writing this too =PP

Wow, that was funny (and hot). I'd like to read more on this couple, good job!