Reviews for Through the Eyes of Fred A Cricket

Reviews For: Through the Eyes of Fred A Cricket

Religion0 2008-04-22 ch 2,	abuseHah! Hillarious!
Mystic Yoshie 2007-12-23 ch 3,	abuseSo amusing! Yes I am very glad you kept this going! Fred you have some issues! I LOVE IT!
freakyanimegal456 2007-12-23 ch 3,	abuseXD! Hey, Chala! CATNIP! Chala:...(Twitch)...MINNE! Heheheheheh...no all we need is for someone to make Trethe play fetch...n.n
Holy Spork 2007-12-21 ch 2,	abuseMore awesome. :) I like how you've started to incorporate more characters from Tasks of Spirit. Poor Mithos, Fred thinks he's a sissy. (He probably wouldn't say that if Mithos still had the Eternal Sword...) My favorite part was probably when Fred started 'yelling' at his diary. I think the wonder cricket needs a cricket therapist, no? Are you going to continue this? That would be cool, but if you can't come up with anything, then don't force yourself. Forced funny isn't really that funny. Good job!
Holy Spork 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuse...You are my new hero. Seriously, this is so funny and nuts, it's great! I pity poor George though. Fred seemed to be enough of a failure at World Domination, so George is going to be the butt of many, many jokes. It's still funny though. :) This is pure brilliance: Fred threatening his diary, eating the happy mushrooms, George... I wish I could offer some criticism, and feel like a good reviewer, but this is too perfect. Kudos. On to the next chapter...
freakyanimegal456 2007-12-16 ch 2,	abuseXD! Oh I do so love this story...I'll tell everyone who reads Tasks of Spirit to read it, it's so funny! HAhahahah! I love all this. My brother liked it too, it's just he doesn't have an account yet. Heeheheheheh...funni. Oh! I just had a thought...say Fred finally gets his cheese pizza, then Chala and Yuan break down the door, take the cheese, then run. Oh that would be so rich. n.n FUNNY! ME LIKE! Definitely need more revs- My little brother: FRED THE CRICKET IS AWESOME! Me:...We know, I made him, now- MLB: WORLD DOMINATION! Me:...Yeah, okay... Hee. I love how you make Fred! n.n Next cricket chapter I should have him doing this, if it's all right. n.n MLB: CRICKETS WILl-! me: SHUT UP! Geez...Merry Christmas! n.n
Billy Bob Joe 2 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseYou should either ask FreakyAnimeGal to fit in another story about Fred where he manages to conquer the world, or write a sequel. This was a good idea that you've thougth of.
freakyanimegal456 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseO.O! XD! AHAHAHAHAH! That was priceless! PRICELESS! Hilarious and totally cracked! Just the way I like it! Oh Fred, I knew you were an evil dictator, I just knew it...eeheheheheh. Maybe I should have George the Cricket make a cameo apperance...ehehehhe You should totally update this. You have my permission. Since it is my character, though, may I offer some...suggestions? X3 1. Fred the Cricket teaches Sari about 'proper planning of world domination' saying her father was a novice. Like So: Sari: Oh, really? Hm, that's very intersting. Fred: Cricekt crick crickle. Sari: Yes, Daddy wasn't very intimidating, seeing he looked like...a blonde version of me. Fred: Crick! Mithos: What the-!? Is that cricket teaching you how to plan world domination!? Sari:...Maybe...? Mithos: Sari! I'm hurt! T.T I thought I got to, since I'm your daddy! Sari: Daddy, you really need to toughen up... Fred: Crick. 2. Nagas attemtps to eat Fred, Fred freaks out and tries to run away. Nagas is eveel. Like so: Fred: Cricket crik- Nagas: Hello, Fred. Fred: OH CRAP! H-hi N-nagas-! Nagas: I've heard you've been trying to take over the world... Fred:...Er...so? Nagas: That's MY job you insolent insect! I am the spirit of spite! I am the queen of chaos! I am the demon of disaster! No way in HELL are you taking over the world before me! Fred:...Make you a deal, you don't tell Origin I'm up to world domination, I won't tell him about you. Nagas:...Hm...allow me to ponder this...uh, no. Fred: (Runs) I'm outta here! 3. Cheresea catches Fred trying to take over the world, pulls out the whole 'I'm your boss so knock the hell off' card. Cheresea: FRED! KNOCK IT OFF! Fred: Make me. Cheresea: Do you want me to sick Chala on you!? Fred: NO! NOT THE EVIL BLUEHEAD! Cheresea: So knock it off! Fred: SILENCE! You're already on my hate list, you and the ninja-boy for making me do all those stunts... Cheresea: Whatever. Now get me a sandwhich. Fred: You can not make me! Cheresea: Sandwhich. Now. Fred:...How I despise spirit law...CURSE YOU, CHERESEA! Cheresea: That's SARU Cheresea to you, now go get me my sandwhich. Don't forget the mustard. Fred: YOU WILL RUE THIS DAY! XD! Oh yes, definitely continue it. n.n

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