 Siriusmunchkin 2009-09-14 . chapter 1Cool. |
 IRite4Potter 2008-09-28 . chapter 1That was great! I enjoyed it! I really liked, "You should've seen his face when she told him to take off her knickers and open up her legs, it looked like he was being told to shag his wife in front of her mother"! |
 Serinity46 2008-01-17 . chapter 1I loved it, I though Sirius's POV was really funny too :D |
 little miss michelle 2008-01-04 . chapter 1I love that you put in sirius pov. it was great |
 madison 2007-12-23 . chapter 1 lol this was funny, and cute . nice job |
 xLupinxLoverx 2007-12-18 . chapter 1This is amazing!!
I loved Sirius' point of view, it made me laugh the most. I loved the lines:
''You should’ve seen his face when she told him to take off her knickers and open up her legs, it looked like he was being told to shag his wife in front of her mother! HAHAHA!''
''...had told Remus to take off my knickers and open my legs on the bed. I wanted to laugh at the expression on his face as he took in her words, but I couldn’t; the pain was too much.''
I love it, definetly going in my favourites! |
 Merryb87 2007-12-14 . chapter 1Another great story, very sweet and funny in some places!
Mind if I nitpick a little though? Nothing to serious, but Teddy would be Sirius's cousin, not nephew. |
 xodegrasibabiixo 2007-12-14 . chapter 1lol I like Sirus's pov! |
 mischief manage 2007-12-14 . chapter 1*Claps hands*Very excellent job! Hope too hear more in the future! |