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Reviews for: Birth Of Teddy
Siriusmunchkin
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
Cool.
IRite4Potter
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
That was great! I enjoyed it! I really liked, "You should've seen his face when she told him to take off her knickers and open up her legs, it looked like he was being told to shag his wife in front of her mother"!
Serinity46
2008-01-17 . chapter 1
I loved it, I though Sirius's POV was really funny too :D
little miss michelle
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
I love that you put in sirius pov. it was great
madison
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
lol this was funny, and cute . nice job
xLupinxLoverx
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
This is amazing!!

I loved Sirius' point of view, it made me laugh the most. I loved the lines:

''You should’ve seen his face when she told him to take off her knickers and open up her legs, it looked like he was being told to shag his wife in front of her mother! HAHAHA!''

''...had told Remus to take off my knickers and open my legs on the bed. I wanted to laugh at the expression on his face as he took in her words, but I couldn’t; the pain was too much.''

I love it, definetly going in my favourites!
Merryb87
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
Another great story, very sweet and funny in some places!
Mind if I nitpick a little though? Nothing to serious, but Teddy would be Sirius's cousin, not nephew.
xodegrasibabiixo
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
lol I like Sirus's pov!
mischief manage
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
*Claps hands*Very excellent job! Hope too hear more in the future!
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