 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-03-17 . chapter 1A great story. I liked the part where Lindsay took Danny to her place. |
 mercy4vr 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Very good behind the scenes take on the story! |
 CarolinaH.Manning 2007-12-15 . chapter 1its beautiful. simple yet strong. exactly what she would, or could, do |
 dutchtreat 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Perfect. Lindsay didn't need to worry; she's helping him by just being there. |
 The Little Corinthian 2007-12-14 . chapter 1I was SO bummed we didn't get any D/L out of that eppy (I mean, c'mON!! Perfect set up!), so thank you for giving us some! :0P I would have loved to see a scene like this. Very nice job! :0) |
 ncisabbylover 2007-12-14 . chapter 1Well i loved it i think its a great take on the scene and i would have loved to see it in the show this is the best ive read so far! |
 kcatlin 2007-12-14 . chapter 1I liked it, very good |
 HillHarperHOT 2007-12-14 . chapter 1I think you did great. I knew when the first thing I read was the last two lines, that it would be good. |