Reviews for Should and Shouldn't

Reviews For: Should and Shouldn't

Sargent Snarky 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseI love how you write the Stantons! The one thing I don't like about this piece, though, is how you end it. It seems unrealistic for Bran and Will to immediately jump from admitting their feelings for each other and accepting it into making out and /more/. It's not the kissing I have a problem with. it's the 'unwrapping your presents' bit. It just... as a teenager myself, it seems unrealistic to immediately move from admitting feelings to moving into something heavy like that. Both boys are somewhat reserved by nature, so I should think they'd be more inclined to take things slower. Neither one has been in a relationship of this sort before, after all, and earlier you had Will expressing hesitation and what seemed to be worry about others' reactions. He was more or less certain of his feelings but uncertain of how to act upon them. To take such a large step forward from what was mere friendship to a rather romantic relationship without taking any smaller steps between really just seems... too much. Otherwise, though, no complaints. Good job! Except for the ending, this is one of the few Bran x Will fics that I think stays true to the characters and all.
Heart of Shou 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuseCute! I loved this piece! All the character interaction was fun and wonderful. I hope you go on to write more!
Teldra 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseSweet :)
L.A.H.H. 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseCute, and pretty funny too. Great story.
LittleLinor 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuse... I should know better than to let myself get caught in this fandom again. I worship these books, and there's way too little stuff on them. Anyway, awesome fic, and you win for being one of the people who made me go from "Will and Bran? Never thought about THAT pairing before" to "... how the hell did I not think of it before". :faves:
dragonrider713 2007-12-16 ch 1,	abuseTHis is really good! There's gonna be more, right? Cuz I wanna read more! Great job!
Lune-Solei 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseGah! Brilliant. I loved it. It was so sweet, and cute, and realistic. It made me all warm and fuzzy inside because the voices seemed to fit so perfectly! Thank you for sharing and good job!

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