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| Enajnitram 2008-09-30 ch 9,  | abuseanother great story, enjoyed all three. welldone n thanks! |
| Wings90 2008-09-29 ch 9, | abuseDefinitely had fun. Thank you. :) |
| CaramelMonkey 2008-09-28 ch 9, | abuseYAY! Good Job! xD |
| HAZMOT 2008-09-28 ch 9, | abuseWell I guess we figuired out that Vala saved Daniel and Elizabeth too. Now we see all are with children and happy. This has been one emotional ride and the ending is so fitting for Vala and Daniel. Their children will grow up, knowing the sacrifices both made to have them in the world safe and happy. Nice. :D |
| acer-sigma 2008-09-27 ch 9, | abuseGood ending! Glad to see that Vala's idea to save Daniel and Elizabeth worked out in the end! Nice introduction of the kids. Was a bit surprised that Jack and Sam would name their daughter after Jack's late son. Till next time! |
| HAZMOT 2008-09-20 ch 8, | abuseI'm glad Vala finally came up with a solution to help Daniel, especially that they have a child that she wants to share her life with Daniel. What ever happened to Elizabeth, certainly this replicator is not concerned if Daniel dies and seems to want him to ascend. Vala is pushing for her families life and I'm glad that Sam pushed to get the Sarcophogus to Atlantis. I just hope it's not too late. :D |
| bluedragon1836 2008-09-19 ch 8, | abuseplease right the next chapter soon! I want to know what happens!! |
| CaramelMonkey 2008-09-19 ch 8, | abuseYuss! An update! Uhh. Good Chapter! But I don't remember Sam and John being the same rank...but I guess you could put it that way since it's your story. I don't know. I don't really mind. But yeah. Hopefully Vala's super brilliant idea works! |
| acer-sigma 2008-09-19 ch 8, | abuseLeave it to Vala to come up with the most obvious solution to their problems. It'll be interesting to see if the sarcophagus can 'reset' Daniel so as to avoid the ascension process. Rather enjoyed the veiled threat to retrieve the sarcophagus themselves if the IOA didn't let them have it. Bit of a nit pick, you actually refered to the IOA as the IOC in this chapter. Plus Carter and Sheppard aren't the same rank as you indicated. Sam's a full Col. while Sheppard is a l. |
| HAZMOT 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseI think Vala was right to stay behind. If something happened to Daniel and her, then she would not be able to forgive herself if something happened to Katheryn. Now that they have retrieved Daniel, will he be able to be a father now or will Vala have to carry on for herself and little Katheryn? :D |
| bluedragon1836 2008-08-21 ch 7, | abuseooh, post the next chapter soon! Please! |
| Enajnitram 2008-08-21 ch 7, | abusegreat story glad its still going :) |
| acer-sigma 2008-08-21 ch 7, | abuseQuite the jumble of scenes. Curious to know what Daniel's condition is, and just what it is that John did that he feels he needs forgiveness for. |
| Flowerpot 2008-08-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseReally pleased you updated this, it's a story I would love to see completed :) Hope Daniel is ok although alittle/alot of angst is always good ;) |
| CaramelMonkey 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseaw... its cute that Vala's making sacrafices for her daughter... :D |