AWSOME! keep it up!

This is, by far, one of my most favorite stories! Easily top 10 and I've read and favorited probably hundreds! Though the last chapter was a little long winded, I can't wait for a future installment...to bad you don't write Naruto stories...the series needs some good authors and stories. There too far and inbetween.

...MY GOD...

Wow... just... wow. This story is beyond awesome, exceedingly well written and not a single part is wasted or unnecessary. When I started reading it yesterday I thought it had an awesome setup, a tzeentchian, chaos shinji and I thought you were going to abandon the more perplexing screw-ups of the evangelion timeline but instead you made them work with your story. But that's not the best part. The best part was the honest and damn near PERFECT portrayal of the gods you had. This story was just a joy to read from start to finish- even if it destroyed my sleep schedule. I'll look forward to more of it in the future, or not if you decide not to do more. At this point I don't think I'll question your conclusions regarding continuation.

...I think my brain broke...

so wrong, but so good

wow...awesome!

As a budding 40K fan (I didn't get into in High School, so I had to wait till I had the income to again to start in...), I really enjoyed this. I was entertained from start to end, even as some of your descriptions of Rei turned my stomach. All in all, VERY well done. Bravo!

*sniff* Not only was that one of the greatest fanfictions I have ever read, but THIS CHAPTER is by far THE GREATEST chapter I have ever had the honor of viewing.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS UTTERLY BRILLIANT STORY. Better than canon doesn't even begin to describe it.

I look forward to continuing onto "The Open Door."

This is perhaps the best description of a Temple of Nurgal I have ever seen or read. It's the most disgusting, sicking, and loving thing ever. Great Job!

Share Shinji, could that possibly end well for him?

brought a tear to my eye. ciao

Good to see some review, still a totaly unbelievable series of events though. It truely acts like shinji had no brain, did no thinking and noticed nothing. All but ruling out all his previous strengths. If the planner always dies by his own plan why don't the powers that be higher then shinji ever get it?

It was just to heavy handed, to complete, to quick and to unbeatable. Even the Chaos gods can't have everything go right that easily..specialy considering how little presence they had in this world. I also can't understand why a mentaly strong person like Shinji would even worship Tzeentch, he is not a follower he's a leader and after series of utter screw ups why believe such a person could help? Looks like his life went to hell because some outside power strong then him.. so he prays to the ultimate back stabber?

Even after waking up he didn't question Rei's sudden helpfulness at all! Specialy when she admits being part his downfall in first place. Like I said his ability think just totaly stopped in chapter 14.. like an author yanking away an ability because they felt it was to much retroactively.

Totaly unbelievable turn of events. It acts like Shinji has no say in anything that he wouldn't just kill his father for threatening Asuka, that his powers suddenly couldn't do anything he wouldn't notice a change in the eva, he wouldn't read the minds of people to learn of the plots?

This is the most fudged up 'plot dump' I have ever read and even in a dream world nightmare it's unbelievable. Also to say couldn't kill him just becaues Rei was around? It's all so unbelievable and crappy. Why is it every Eva/40k fic builds up the power and strength of everyone.. then suddenly makes shinji totaly helpless? Worse then the crying little baby from canon? Are authors so afraid of a skilled hero that they make godly unstopable changes to challenge them?

Over all this is just one huge summary chapter, not unlike an outline..to perfect to be real. IF this isn't some kind dream sequence I have to say this chapter ruined an other wise good story. It unloaded a whole mess of problems and acted like Shinji was sitting back and doing nothing durring all them. He didn't rationaly think about anything, didn't work stop anything.. all these events act like shinji played no part in anything.

Plus the whole guilt thing seems a bit over the top, I don't think he's type person take guilt and credit for every little thing that went wrong outside his precious people.

FUCK.

YES.

The final few paragraphs tell it all. The awesome twist on the classic opening to any 40k book is a fitting end for it.

And now I can finally get around to reading Open Door...