this story is even better the second time! you really did a fantastic job. inertia creeps is without a doubt my favourite fanfic :]

HM like hannah montana! xD sorry couldn't resist

This was an absolutly amazing story! I think I'd rather call it a novel! It took me a solid four days to get through this, and as I was getting to the end, I could feel myself well up. I love this so much, the way Roxas was, the way Axel was... It was just epic to read. I thank you for writing such a masterpiece! XD

“Zexion went out earlier this morning. You know …he does his grandpa walks or whatever it is he does at this time in the morning.”


LOL! i think i've read this at least four times, and that sentence gets me to laugh each time

update soon

Wow. Just… Wow. When I first saw this story, it took me forever to read it, just because I didn't really have the time to. Then I sat down, started reading it, and was hooked. The raw emotion in this was so amazing and just made me feel… well, I hate to say happy when the themes weren't happy, but when there was a happy moment, I would just be enjoying it for the whole day, and I'd be happily upset whenever I read a sad part.

Then it ended, and I was just so… I loved it. Completely, honestly loved it. I love how Roxas was so… real, like he actually had the reasons behind his inner turmoil, and how Axel just kept pushing through to him, finally in the end showing him it was all okay. That all just… struck something in me, you know? Like, everyone can be loved, they all have a chance to be loved, no matter what. And reading your AN at the end was just… it all was so heartwarming, and I was so happy that it ended happy, and how it ended, although truthfully I didn't see the part with Tifa at all (although it made me very happy that it was Tifa and not Aerith =3 Just sayin').

So… I guess this was just to say thank you for writing such a story, sharing it with us, and that it was so wonderful to read. I really look up to you as an author, and this was amazing to read.

Holy shit on a stick, this story is effin' uh-mazing! Read it all in one go, yes I did and oh dear, it was so great. Frosted Flakes great, that's how great. It really moved me to tears and I mean that, garwsh darn, a fine story you got here. Although there were a few typos throughout, it wasn't too important. And oh me oh my I absolutely love love love stories where the main characters are fabulously rich and famous! Some of my favorite kinds, right there. EVERYTHING in here was and the ending was PERFECT. God, I want to make sweet love to this story, it was that good. OTL, I fear I'm just rambling on... I guess I'll end my review here, dearie.

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I have to say, that was really some quality writing.

I usually don’t indulge in yaoi very often, but to me, this story isn’t just categorized as “yaoi” or even “akuroku”. It’s this wonderful novel that I have been reading this past month. And I absolutely loved it. It actually helped me to help my mother solve things with my step-father. No joking.

Either way, I do have one complaint.

I know how hard it is to even update at times, and typos are the bane of a writer’s existence, but there were quite a few sloppy typos (especially in the upper-twenties). Now your writing is wonderful, and really, not only does this story have a superb plot, but it is probably the only fanfic I’ve ever read that actually helped me with something in my life. But, there were times when a certain word was mistyped in a sentence, and it really ended up losing all of its meaning.

I do have to tell you though, I really enjoyed Roxas’s comments throughout, and I think he was a wonderful narrator. I also have this little thought in my mind. After Ansem asked Roxas about the fact that he used to enjoy writing, I kind of got this idea that this story is almost like a novel Roxas wrote, after everything that happened.

And, really, the last line of Chapter 30 made me almost cry.

Anyway, thank you so very much for taking the time out of your life to write this and I can’t wait to indulge in your other stories.

-Nekozawa

"I love you guys and all, but there’s too much lovey dovey rainbow sausageness going on here tonight."
"Brooke Manly Chin Hogan Knows Best"
You are made of win.
:D

Firefox is Roxas approved.
:D

Oh. This, was.. I can't even describe it. I laughed, I cried, I thought...I don't really know what to say, but... Thank you for writing this. I think its one of the best things I have ever read, and I know I learned something from it. Im so glad I was able to read it.

Im so happy I found this story.

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I'm reading this in my third period class, and then this DREAM just comes out of NOWHERE.
And them I'm like "OMG! I'm reading a lime, IN SCHOOL! And that's not sexy...not at all."
So I decided to continue this story at home for now on, since there might be these THINGS that just POP out of NOWHERE.
But wow, I really was anticipating sum good 8-13, and I'm suprised it "came" so soon.
:D
(Even though it was just a LIME that I read IN SCHOOL)

"I went out on a date! With a girl, a bit late …SHE HAD SO MANY FRIENDS! Gliding through many hands …I BROUGHT OUT MY POGO STICK! Just to SHOW HER MY TRICKS!”

System of a Down pride.
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I honestly think this must be one of my favorite fics ever. This was the 4th time I read this, and still this kept me hooked right to the end. I love everything about this fic - no, I'm not lying nor exaggerating, I really do. This is incredibly detailed, from all the descriptions of the places to the inner feelings of the characters (mainly Roxas) to everything, really, because I got the feeling this could all have easily been real, that Roxas really could've been a real, living person who was telling the reader his story - simply because every single detail was so well-thought.

There's no pointless drama, everything that happens, happens for a reason, and I think that's one of the rarest things in fanfiction - so many authors try to make their story more interesting by adding there drama after drama, without thinking does it make sense with the overall plot. Here, everything did make sense, and I seriously respect that. It made the story believable, interesting (because you could relate with the events, relate with Roxas' feelings and actions, because they were justified and in accordance with all the rest that happened).

I also love the way you somehow took all these characters and made them your own without really changing their personalities. You made them stay true to the game, they really were the ones we know and love, but you created an entirely believable story with characters of its own, and when reading it it was so easy to get absorbed in it, and not think that these characters were actually drawn from some game. I'm honestly amazed of how well you built the plot, wrote the characters, the interaction was really, really brilliant, and I don't think I've ever read more in-character Roxas and Axel. Or Zexion, for that matter - I really adored him in this.

To cut this short (or well, one can hardly call this review "short" anymore), I'm absolutely, positively, 100% in love with this story. I'm sure I'll read this many many times in the future, and I know I'm going to love this even then just as much as I do now. And I think the message behind this fic, that we all need someone and that we should reach out to others and believe, is really important, and that the way you showed it in this fic was simply beautiful.

I sincerely thank you for writing this and sharing it with us readers. This fic has helped me many times when I've felt hollow, sad or uncertain about life and other people, and I believe I'm not the only one to whom this has brought comfort and joy (as well as a wonderful reading experience).

this is taking way long for them to get together.. not complaining too much though coz im loving this story so far... i cant wait to hear all about hayner though, seems like its gonna be pretty interesting