I fell in love with your story. That is all i have to say.

Well-deserving masterpiece you have here.

After I finished, I went back to the first chapter and read the first sentence: "I think...I dreamed of green eyes".

Needless to say, it blew my mind.

well, damn. all i can say is this: you are awesome.

it takes a damn good story to make me turn insomniac just to finish reading it, but i kid you not, i got practically no sleep because i was so enthralled with this story. and i also missed class by oversleeping... but oh well.

on a less serious note: Demyx is great. XD he's one of my favorites besides Axel and now you've given me even more of a reason to love him.

and damn have you gotten me way into this pairing. >_> and it's gotten my Muse back into wanting to write something from first-person.

anyway. i'm jumping around but oh well. i have to say, i like how slowly the relationship went. it's way more believable that it took them the majority of the story to finally admit their feelings. And it took nearly that long for Roxas to get his head out of his ass. way more believable than a lot of writers on this site who have their characters falling madly in love at first sight... it doesn't work that way.

so yeah. you are most definitely going on my list of authors to worship. -nodnod-

Fanfuckingtastic. I spent two days reading this, it's brilliant and gifted me with a severe inferiority complex, but that's fine. Wonderful, made me want to hurry up and start on my next fic. You're an amazing writer.

this story is even better the second time! you really did a fantastic job. inertia creeps is without a doubt my favourite fanfic :]

HM like hannah montana! xD sorry couldn't resist

This was an absolutly amazing story! I think I'd rather call it a novel! It took me a solid four days to get through this, and as I was getting to the end, I could feel myself well up. I love this so much, the way Roxas was, the way Axel was... It was just epic to read. I thank you for writing such a masterpiece! XD

“Zexion went out earlier this morning. You know …he does his grandpa walks or whatever it is he does at this time in the morning.”


LOL! i think i've read this at least four times, and that sentence gets me to laugh each time

update soon

Wow. Just… Wow. When I first saw this story, it took me forever to read it, just because I didn't really have the time to. Then I sat down, started reading it, and was hooked. The raw emotion in this was so amazing and just made me feel… well, I hate to say happy when the themes weren't happy, but when there was a happy moment, I would just be enjoying it for the whole day, and I'd be happily upset whenever I read a sad part.

Then it ended, and I was just so… I loved it. Completely, honestly loved it. I love how Roxas was so… real, like he actually had the reasons behind his inner turmoil, and how Axel just kept pushing through to him, finally in the end showing him it was all okay. That all just… struck something in me, you know? Like, everyone can be loved, they all have a chance to be loved, no matter what. And reading your AN at the end was just… it all was so heartwarming, and I was so happy that it ended happy, and how it ended, although truthfully I didn't see the part with Tifa at all (although it made me very happy that it was Tifa and not Aerith =3 Just sayin').

So… I guess this was just to say thank you for writing such a story, sharing it with us, and that it was so wonderful to read. I really look up to you as an author, and this was amazing to read.

Holy shit on a stick, this story is effin' uh-mazing! Read it all in one go, yes I did and oh dear, it was so great. Frosted Flakes great, that's how great. It really moved me to tears and I mean that, garwsh darn, a fine story you got here. Although there were a few typos throughout, it wasn't too important. And oh me oh my I absolutely love love love stories where the main characters are fabulously rich and famous! Some of my favorite kinds, right there. EVERYTHING in here was and the ending was PERFECT. God, I want to make sweet love to this story, it was that good. OTL, I fear I'm just rambling on... I guess I'll end my review here, dearie.

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I have to say, that was really some quality writing.

I usually don’t indulge in yaoi very often, but to me, this story isn’t just categorized as “yaoi” or even “akuroku”. It’s this wonderful novel that I have been reading this past month. And I absolutely loved it. It actually helped me to help my mother solve things with my step-father. No joking.

Either way, I do have one complaint.

I know how hard it is to even update at times, and typos are the bane of a writer’s existence, but there were quite a few sloppy typos (especially in the upper-twenties). Now your writing is wonderful, and really, not only does this story have a superb plot, but it is probably the only fanfic I’ve ever read that actually helped me with something in my life. But, there were times when a certain word was mistyped in a sentence, and it really ended up losing all of its meaning.

I do have to tell you though, I really enjoyed Roxas’s comments throughout, and I think he was a wonderful narrator. I also have this little thought in my mind. After Ansem asked Roxas about the fact that he used to enjoy writing, I kind of got this idea that this story is almost like a novel Roxas wrote, after everything that happened.

And, really, the last line of Chapter 30 made me almost cry.

Anyway, thank you so very much for taking the time out of your life to write this and I can’t wait to indulge in your other stories.

-Nekozawa

"I love you guys and all, but there’s too much lovey dovey rainbow sausageness going on here tonight."
"Brooke Manly Chin Hogan Knows Best"
You are made of win.
:D

Firefox is Roxas approved.
:D

Oh. This, was.. I can't even describe it. I laughed, I cried, I thought...I don't really know what to say, but... Thank you for writing this. I think its one of the best things I have ever read, and I know I learned something from it. Im so glad I was able to read it.

Im so happy I found this story.

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