 Death's Apostle 2008-12-28 . chapter 16Hey
I think it's so unfortunate this story hasn't had the reviews it deserves. I think you've done a good job integrating a female pilot into the Gundam Wing plot line. I was always so disappointed the original writers didn't do that themselves.
Please keep writing this story as it is one of the very few on this site with a decent female character and plot.
Best,
Death's Apostle |
 Name Under Construction 2008-09-08 . chapter 16You know, if you think about it, technically, Alexa should be the most important pilot as she's 00, and the pilots seem to rank in importance from 1 to 5. |
 angelsmystique 2008-08-17 . chapter 16hey, sorry i havent reviewed lately. I've ben majorly busy. Two of my grandfathers are in the hospital. One is dying and one just got out of a major heart surgery. I really enjoyed that chapter :) This is one of my favorite parts in the series and i love how Alexa acts in this. :) |
 Archsage Soren 2008-08-03 . chapter 16Sorry it took me so long to R and R, but I was busy. Another great chapter, but I am much to tired to fully elaborate. One time you reffered to Alexa as Alex, but it doesn't matter. Other than that, I noticed nothing out of the ordinary that is bad, so good job. I loved this and I look forward to the next update. |
 Archsage Soren 2008-07-21 . chapter 15I loved this chapter, especially Zech's flashback. That was a wonderful piece of writing! I hope you keep enjoying this story enough yourself to keep writing it, because I am hopelessly addicted. |
 angelsmystique 2008-07-20 . chapter 15I'm thinking theres definitely some sparks between alexa and heero. :) Love it! |
 the reader 2008-07-18 . chapter 14 I would just like to say, keep on writing, and good work with what you've done so far. Don't just leave us hanging here though, that would be very rude.
Great job, keep it up and all that.
Please write more, and soon.
Thanks! |
 Name Under Construction 2008-07-11 . chapter 14That girls tears stopped me
girl's
Now you should know why I admire your strength…both of you.”
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Feels like kind of a slow chapter for some reason... but anyways, good job! |
 Archsage Soren 2008-07-11 . chapter 14I tried to review a minute ago but my internet needed reset. Gr.
I loved it, actually this time. Alexa is such a cool character, I wish I knew her and she was an RL person. What I really like is how you have been true to your word, adding the extra pilot without changing the plot. That is really hard, yet you do it so well. I also like how you use things that were actually said in the episode, like Heero's bit about following your emotions. On a scale of 1 to 10, you get another Solid 10. |
 angelsmystique 2008-07-11 . chapter 13oh wow, so alexa isnt just anothwr pilot to fight but also something to "keep the team together." Nice little twist you got there. lol!! |
 Name Under Construction 2008-07-10 . chapter 13Hello again!
Mistake
Nah, you’re the one who save him
Saved
Trowa doesn't laugh in your rewrite! |
 Archsage Soren 2008-07-09 . chapter 13I was shocked to see an update alert Email for this, actually. A pleasent shock, but shocked nonetheless. That being said... I really like what you have going on this chapter. REALLY Like it. You write this story too well for your own good, soon fangirls/boys will be attacking you for slow updates... be warned, and be sure to keep a gun nearby you at all times. Those Fanboys strike from the shadows, and the Fangirls strike in mobs. Huge Mobs that you cannot imagine!
Er, enough of my insanity for now. I looked for grammar errors for a bit, but got to lost in the story to look for long. I didn't find any myself, and I highly doubt there were enough to merit a mention anyways. Wonderful job once again. May the Muses bless you, or maybe I should say CONTINUE to bless you :D |
 angelsmystique 2008-06-16 . chapter 5So, i was very surprised when i had that message in my email. i was like, "oh? what is this?" And then i got very happy and a bit confused. lol!! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Nixie002 2008-05-13 . chapter 12I thought it was going quite well. I really like the Alexa and Heero interactions. I am confused on how she fits into the Peacecraft family though. But none the less, it's a great story. I hope you'll decide to pick this back up soon. |
 angelsmystique 2008-04-29 . chapter 12so, its over? sorry i havent reviewed. ive ben busy with college and stuff. i have finals next week and ive ben rushing around and **. i didnt even know ur story had ben updated. its ben rather busy here. that's kinda like, an abrupt way to end a very good story. |