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| xdassx 2008-10-02 ch 34,  | abuseyour story is great, u really have a talent in writing... ur stories are probably the only ones that actually have its own plot. keep up the good work! |
| Miromyth 2008-07-20 ch 35, | abuseso i read this story a long time ago before i really got hooked on fanfiction and it hooked me from the start. i just recently remembered it and tried to find it again. anyways this story is so awesome! most of the time you sound like a professional writer so i think that you should become one. this story really is better than most of the stories on here cuz it actually has a plot. thank you so much for writing this. |
| EllipsisAddict 2008-06-27 ch 33, | abuseYou know, I really wasn't expecting to like this, but I got sucked in and just kept reading... This fic was great! Epically great. I absolutely love Nero and Rail and Memo and - and everyone, really. It's incredibly hard to make likeable OCs, but I definitely think you pulled it off. I really liked the ending, too, even though it was so sad. Max and Fang dying together like that... intense. I don't even LIKE Fax, but it still worked. One thing, though - you really have a problem mixing up your and you're. I got thrown out of some really dramatic scenes because of that. :( But, uh, other than that, I can't really think of anything I didn't like. Did I mention how much I love Nero? Because he's awesome. |
| Ratfink 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseRight, I'm gonna tell you something straight out; there are thirteen people's story's in my Favourites. It takes a lot for them to be there, because I don't put tabs on just ANY stories. Which is why I added yours to it the second I read the first paragraph; you and your writing deserve to be noticed and appreciated, and personally, I don't think 230 reviews really, truly gives this story the attention it deserves. You give out enough infomation to keep us from being confused and losing the plot, but not enough that we lose interest in the story and don't want to read what comes in the next chapter. The language was perfect too, it set the scene and we, as the readers, could clearly see what you were portraying. keep it up. |
| maxPod 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuseWould you mind if I ask you how old you are? You don't have to be specific. I mean, your skills are just...wow. I wanna know how long I have to practice until I can write with as much of a smooth flow as you. Maybe instead of your age, you can tell me how many years you've been writing. |
| WingsOfDestiny27 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseum, scary, much? also, very deep. and scary. byee! camrinaxx |
| Allie108 2008-03-09 ch 32, | abuseM-AZING STORY! |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 33, | abuseAwh... Nice job. But now it's over. Again. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 32, | abuse“I am,” Nero growled, carefully pulling himself to his feet, “every drop of blood you’ve ever split. Every child you’ve ever killed. Every soul you’ve ever damned…” GASP. THE QUOTE. Amazing, well-written, excellent, fitting ending. BUT WHY RATH? |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 31, | abuseI hate water-rising-to-the-ceiling-and-almost-killing-everyone scenes. Nice job, though. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 30, | abuseXD Loved the ending. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 29, | abuseAwesome ending. Oh, yeah, loved this: "...and now they went to go kill off Itex!" |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 28, | abuseRath is my new favorite character. Just so you know. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 27, | abuseI prefer blowing up water towers myself, but, hey, whatever kind of water floats your boat. You always have such great, dramatic endings for your chapters. Amazing. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-02-29 ch 26, | abuseOh... I was thinking that he was dying of dehydration... |