Yeah, I've just read Chappie 27, and this is AMAZING!

I never understand how many stories that aren't all that good get so many reviews just because it's basically just about Fax. Then a mind-boggling story comes about with very little Fax (as far as I've read) and it's not so popular review wise. This thing is brilliant!

*Sighs* Aah, the MR fanfiction world.

~TM

WOW! this story was really really good. you did a wonderful job portraying everything in it. i felt like i was right there in the mist of all the action. great job!! this is one of the best max ride stories ive read. very creative!

I think you are a very good writer and you have good ideas, but the mood of the entire fic has been completely depressing. I want to keep reading, but it is putting me in a bad mood.

Aw. D':

THE ENDING. WAS SO NICE. D:
I cried at the end. :') Amazing story.

Oh shit.

Goddamn you, Jeb. D:<

AIE FANG 8DD

OhGod. Poor Nero- DON'T DIE. D:

I was crying when I read about Fang. D':

This story is so good. c:

Aww. D:

D:

I feel so bad for Nudge. This just broke my heart. :(

Oh my gosh.

MAX? :D Poor Nero. D: Life must really suck for him. :[

That was.. Great. Awesome. Fantastic. Brilliant. Superb. Sad, but fantastic. And that doesn't even cover it! I really enjoyed myself reading this.
This is one of the few stories here that actually has its own real plot. You don't deserve 236 reviews! This story deserves a hell lot more! I can't believe it - those people are missing out on a LOT here.
You're really talented, (I wish I could write like you.. Sigh.) and I'm extremely glad that I've gotten the chance to come across The Riddlyr.
Kudos.

Um, wow. That was amazingly good. And sad. I loved it though.

Nero was like "Water..." Angel was like "Water?" And Rail was like " Water!". And memo was like "HUH?" hilorious.

your story is great, u really have a talent in writing...
ur stories are probably the only ones that actually have its own plot. keep up the good work!

so i read this story a long time ago before i really got hooked on fanfiction and it hooked me from the start. i just recently remembered it and tried to find it again. anyways this story is so awesome! most of the time you sound like a professional writer so i think that you should become one. this story really is better than most of the stories on here cuz it actually has a plot. thank you so much for writing this.