I was a bit confused at first (since when did Fai become a girl?) but other than that, I loved it. Mature, discriptive, well-written with a somewhat nostalgic ending. i especially like her different types of "hunger", perhaps you can explore more? (hint, hint)

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

It's awesome! I've been trying to write a fem!FaixSakura story and you have inspired me!