wow that was a pathetic death...drowning during training? *pft* not a ver "ninja like" way to drown now is it... You kinda make her seem weak..

I hope im not being mean. Think of it is as constructive critisisum.

this story makes me uncomfortable... it's really well written

oh this is really good *o*

it's sad..but still pretty darn awesome if i do say so myself.

poor Tenten T.T
poor Neji T.T

Tenten's a horrible swimmer.

And Neji's a bastard.

HOW DARE YOU KILL THE ONE YOU LOVE, NEJI! Damn you, damn you! *kick kick* I'll send squiggly!Lee after you! ><

Anyhow--you know I loved it! I saw it before anyone else and I get first review (I think). IT ** PWNED! Ah!! I almost wanted to cry when I was reading it! OMFG! ;_;

I love your angst. You're the ** woman, my evil overlord!