Okay, this ending was like 100x better! I didn't agree with the whole 'no Tamaki and Haruhi kissing' thing. God that was a stupid ending. THEY SHOULD HAVE KISSED. Somethings NEED to be a cliche. This was one of those times. Your writing was good and the idea was wonderful. You did a wonderful job with descriptions and the characters stayed true - which is hard to do, I know from experience. So yeah. To answer your question, yes, better ending. So, yeah.
Stay Flamin'
Luna

This was cute. I admit I was very disappointed with the ending of episode 26. The whole time I was looking at Haruhi and Tamaki mentally screaming "NOW KISS!"

awww i loved it i think it shouldve ended this way too, tho i still love the scene where theyre holdinh each other before falling into the water and he comes out holding her

I love this story, it's so great! Although you really should put spaces between your paragraphs and spell check this. (eg. you spelled "noses" as "noises", and "moe" as "more" x_x)

yep...i prefer this ending... they actually kiss! awesome job!

lmao yay for this cliche then XD

Ow. My ankle hurts from reading this now. xD

Good ending, you're right.

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aw!

very sweet.

XD

Your story is good,... but it's basically a script! You should add some discriptions into it!

I haven't actually seen/read all of Ouran yet but I did like your ending. lol It was very kawaii! .

I was kinda hoping Tama would go to France, simply for the reason of getting more Host Club. Ya know?

But yeah, I like your ending better.

aww... how nice... :D

Very good. I like your ending better.

okay ... the formatting ruined my eyes ... but i love the story! ... very cute ... i love the sharpie bit ... and the ranka bit ... great job! ... double space next time!

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Cliche'd storys are fine as long as their funny!