i really liked your take on this theme. it caught me off guard that he was dreaming but was still an amazing story

Loved the ending! The piece is subtle but their relationship is also very subtle so it compliments it nicely. Great job!

Oh, I adore this chapter. It was a really interesting, creative take on the prompt. I love this quiet, introspective Roy you've created. My heart just wanted to reach out and hold him. You make me feel so much.

You're getting more emo, bitch. Cheer up.

Omg. I can't wait for the final chapter or epilogue. So pretty, so well thought out, such nice wording. I like it so much.

I find beauty in this breakdown. This was a really nice chapter, one of my favourites so far. It is not better to have loved and lost if it makes you feel this alone.

Riza loved him once in this, and I suppose that even if he doesn't notice and he sees the little things only she still does. Very bittersweet.

Wow. Just so pretty and sad at the same time.

when reading this, i just thought 'and cicadas always take flight together, if even for a moment.' It was very sad. T^T

This chapter was very touching. T^T

This was sad but very pretty.

This is probably one of my favorite chapters from the story. It is really well writeen, and I especially love the ending. I agree, Riza knows Roy well enough to know when he needs her to save him from himself, and as a man with that many demons, that is an important task. You did a very great job on this.

I know someone has probably pointed this out to you, but in the second paragraph, you wrote

She has learnt to whitewash her thoughts and bleach her lips until she cannot remember just what it was she was about to stay anymore.

Did you mean "say"?

Also, I have to ask, what is it with you and eating kittens? That seems a little frightening...

I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter, so post it soon!

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Yeah. I can too. :)

The next one seems angsty- I'm really looking forward to it.

Good job- these are utterly, without question, astounding.

Aw, poor Riza. Wonderful job, I about started to cry right there.

Cousin, this is utterly bittersweet and in character but as morbid as fuck. NICE.