 dainlord 2009-10-02 . chapter 12You wrote:
"Little kami of the flame," she whispered. "Am I ever going to find true love?"
"You already have," the little flame whispered to her.
Now my question: do you mean with the true love rei and derek? Or sombody else? I´m really curious!
Great story(s)! |
 Nocturngirl 2009-07-03 . chapter 11I knew it! |
 Nocturngirl 2009-07-03 . chapter 4Very interesting story so far. Complex with three dimentional characters. I even have ideas as do who the killer is and why. Everything about their future lives is very believable. And I like your transitions and how you are giving each person or couple near equal screen time. You kind of leave us hanging a bit each time. Each time you go back to someone I am interested in how thier own story arc is progessing within the greater story. So, yeah. |
 Nonori 2008-03-01 . chapter 12Go Padres! Gotta show the hometown love.
Anyway, that was an ominous end to an awesome story. Didn't realize the fire actually 'spoke' to Rei, thought it was more along the lines of giving her visions. Superb job handling multiple story lines and weaving them all together at the end. Stories like yours make me realize just how much I love Rei. She's such a tsundere; I laughed at her reaction to Usagi's comforting.
Will there be more parts to this series? I've only read a few, but have loved it all. |
 PriestessHelene 2008-03-01 . chapter 12Very sweet but scary story who knows that could've been Beryl trying to invade the poor soul. |
 petiyaka 2008-03-01 . chapter 12this fic was fantastic! Thanks to bill k. for writing such amazing stories! |
 deep serenity 2008-03-01 . chapter 12 While I knew who was killing everyone weeks ago, I found I loved this story for showcaseing Rei's love interest It was very nice to see the softer side of her, that is the part I really enjoyed with this story, and the two sisters finding there way back to each other. |
 Aishuu 2008-03-01 . chapter 12As usual, a highly engaging tale that keeps multiple plotlines up in the air, and resolves them satisfactorily. I very much enjoyed this work - and the entire SM universe you've created. |
 xeaphon 2008-03-01 . chapter 12 Another great story at its end. I wonder when the flame told Rei that she already found true love it was talking about Usagi. And off the topic, aint Ami's hair blue? |
 sf 2008-03-01 . chapter 12 I would have more things to say but those last couple of lines has left me stunned. So she knows! I'm happy and sad at the same time... happy in the sense that its opened up possibilities for future stories relating to this matter but sad that she's not thinking about a different blonde senshi '^^ Oh well, it should have been expected, considering the Rei in your Crystal Tokyo fics...
All in all, great story! I couldn't help but listen to 10cc's song whenever you updated =) Cheers! |
 RenaH.M. 2008-02-23 . chapter 11 Oh! Now we know who the killer is. I can not wait to see what happens. |
 PriestessHelene 2008-02-23 . chapter 11Ami fight the move Makoto aught you! |
 Jigglypuffer 2008-02-23 . chapter 11Innocuous secondary character, introduced then forgotten! |
 Midnight 2008-02-23 . chapter 11 Koda's last line made me laugh so hard. Nevermind that she was about to slash Ami's neck, thats besides the point. |
 xeaphon 2008-02-23 . chapter 11 Well the slasher is revealed. I thought she was the one who was doing this, Its always the silent one. |