OK this is really bad. I mean it's ghastly! How can you leave a story like this? You have to continue. You just have to! PLEASE!

Just make sure when you use the word "through"... Sometimes it's threw.
It's a really good story.
Sometimes your sentences doesn't make any sense or aren't completed. Also make sure you use enough commas. Rather use too much than not enough.
Otherwise I do love this story

I KNEW IT! I knew he was in love with her!

Love this story! I only found it a week ago and I would really like for you to continue the story abd update soon!

Love it...please update asap!

heartbreaking chapter, i hope things get better for them both!...please update soon!

Please continue. You are getting better at writing.

again...love it...i cant wait until narcissa tells lucius about the baby! update soon!

please update again soon! i cant wait to read more! :)

Love it so far update asap so I can adore the rest .

Now I have to say the story is progressing quite well. There are a lot of grammatical errors like spellings, punctuations and the use of pronouns; but all of that can be fixed. You are an overall good writer and I'd love to see this story finished.

More power!

I hope for another update soon! I love this chapter. :)

Lovely chapter.

Huh? What's Christopher doing there?

Finally, you update!

I rather love this story! However might I suggest just re reading it. I saw a few grammar mistakes and spelling as well :)

:)