Wow.I usually don't like oneshots,

but this was amazing. Good job. :)

wow. honestly the most satisfying one-shot i've ever read. most of the one-shots i have read leave me throwing a tantrum for the authors not turning it into a full-length story.

but this felt like it was meant to be this short.. oh im rambling. i felt satisfied with this oneshot is what i have to say basically )

well done

I love it. Plain and simple. Too bad its so short. Hehe.

OH my that was really good. I like your style of writing and the metaphores that you used. I don't know if i spelled that right. hehe. Anyway, it was excellent.

I liked your fic very very much.

it's nice the way you write both perspectives and how they both tie themselves together.

:D

That was done very well. Beautiful in my opinion. I love how you separated them. First her thoughts and then his. It was vague but it was clear enough to grasp what was happening. And I really like that in stories. Of course I want to know what happens next. Does he walk back into the room? Haha, but I know, I know, it was a one-shot. And it works like that I think. Leaving people to wonder. Personally, I think that your rating is high, considering there wasn't any serious material such as violence, laungauge, or sexual content. The topic matter is serious though but I think you keep it vague enough to lower it to a K. But like I said, that is just my personal opinion. But I love this story and I honestly cannot think of anything particular to critique you on so, well done.

wonderfully made!

i loved it very much!

amazing.

just... amazing.

i haven't read fanfics in a while, and this was the first one i chose to read and it was SO worth it.

this was simply brilliant.

Very good!

that was so beautiful

Wow. . .

I feel really incoherent at the moment because the word "wow" is the only I can really say currently

Wow. . .

I love it, this story has to be one of the best one shot, or rather, stories on here. While their have been better plots and themes, your style of writing makes up for it.

I love how you managed to tell us everything, but also tell us nothing at the time. . .

Bravo!

Keep up the good work!

(P.S I have been a member on this site for a long time, and you are the first person to be added into my fav authors and author alert list)