|Reviews for Small Crimes|
| girlxflipped 7/21/08 . chapter 1
Wow.I usually don't like oneshots,
but this was amazing. Good job. :)
| Beth 6/10/08 . chapter 1
wow. honestly the most satisfying one-shot i've ever read. most of the one-shots i have read leave me throwing a tantrum for the authors not turning it into a full-length story.
but this felt like it was meant to be this short.. oh im rambling. i felt satisfied with this oneshot is what i have to say basically )
| Winds of Autumn 12/30/07 . chapter 1
I love it. Plain and simple. Too bad its so short. Hehe.
| yourlastregret 12/23/07 . chapter 1
OH my that was really good. I like your style of writing and the metaphores that you used. I don't know if i spelled that right. hehe. Anyway, it was excellent.
| aonima 12/17/07 . chapter 1
I liked your fic very very much.
it's nice the way you write both perspectives and how they both tie themselves together.
| NMPress 12/17/07 . chapter 1
That was done very well. Beautiful in my opinion. I love how you separated them. First her thoughts and then his. It was vague but it was clear enough to grasp what was happening. And I really like that in stories. Of course I want to know what happens next. Does he walk back into the room? Haha, but I know, I know, it was a one-shot. And it works like that I think. Leaving people to wonder. Personally, I think that your rating is high, considering there wasn't any serious material such as violence, laungauge, or sexual content. The topic matter is serious though but I think you keep it vague enough to lower it to a K. But like I said, that is just my personal opinion. But I love this story and I honestly cannot think of anything particular to critique you on so, well done.
| maragrette 12/16/07 . chapter 1
i loved it very much!
| me 12/15/07 . chapter 1
| nicole 12/15/07 . chapter 1
i haven't read fanfics in a while, and this was the first one i chose to read and it was SO worth it.
this was simply brilliant.
| siriusforeva 12/15/07 . chapter 1
| Queen Nightingale 12/15/07 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful
| SillyBellaEdwardsForMe 12/15/07 . chapter 1
Wow. . .
I feel really incoherent at the moment because the word "wow" is the only I can really say currently
Wow. . .
I love it, this story has to be one of the best one shot, or rather, stories on here. While their have been better plots and themes, your style of writing makes up for it.
I love how you managed to tell us everything, but also tell us nothing at the time. . .
Keep up the good work!
(P.S I have been a member on this site for a long time, and you are the first person to be added into my fav authors and author alert list)