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| xxDazzledByHisCrookedSmilex... 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseare you 12?? u have so much talent!!lol |
| xxDazzledByHisCrookedSmilex... 2008-08-01 ch 28, | abusegreat story, really cute lol |
| GothicXGirl 2008-07-16 ch 28, | abuseLuv it Read it all |
| AzNmE98XD 2008-07-12 ch 28, | abuseLove your story! Please write the sequel! -Lana |
| Kaci 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Enough said. |
| craziegirl12 2008-04-07 ch 19, | abuseITs awesome/ |
| hsmcrazy3 2008-04-04 ch 17, anon. | abuseone..word AWESOME! I wish I could underline, italicize and quote that. i swear that was one of the best by far. i have an idea for a hsm story and i has been bugging me 24/7 and I can'y post it becasue I don't have an account. So, I have been looking for a person who I think is a really good writer and congrats, you won. So here goes nothing: Troy and Gabriella have been besties since pre-k and are seperated in 8th grade because of gabby moving to another state. Will troy forget everything and anything about her and move on to high school with a fresh start. Will gabriella make an attempt to move on. Then, they are in 10th grade, troy has dated to girls since 8th grade and broke up with his recent one because he can't seem to get over gabriella. Gabriella however has been coping better than troy and has an amazing boyfriend and is on the gymnastics team. In despret need of a hug from gabby, troy convinces his parents to move to gabbie's new town. Once there, troy starts going to gabby's new school and finds her there... Will gabbie dump her bf for troy or ingnore him and pretend nothing happened? If you want to do this story that's awesome, but if not then that's cool too. btw I know this has been a heck of alot to onhale but I'll check your account and ofcourse keep reading your stories. Againg amaazing job!! |
| hsmcrazy3 2008-04-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseI love all of your stories. Especially this on! The whole scenario, it makes you want to keep reading. Keep up the awesome work! As for the improving part. There's not much that can be done. I wouuld suggest puting a twist in the story. Something unexpected and utterly shocking. Something that would make the reader's eyes go wide and look at the screen in utter disbelief! Awesome job!! |
| sanne 2008-03-18 ch 28, anon. | abuseGreat! |
| Chastity and Michelle 2008-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseChas: Omg we love the whole thing we watched it all but we didnt want to stop and review ol sorry but omg i cant wait (omg lol i said i cant wait i can wait llolol GET IT?!?!?!) for the sequel mwah!! luving! Michelle: Whatever she said EEK |
| Emily 2008-03-05 ch 28, anon. | abuseCute... |
| uniquegrl7 2008-02-18 ch 28, | abuseThat was a really good ending! I'm SO sad that it's over. But I'm glad that it's not ALL over and that there's going to be a sequel. This was a wonderful story and you've written it very well. I liked the whole part about Tiffany and Josh and how they DIDN'T win. |
| TwilightTeamEdward 2008-02-18 ch 28, | abuse*sniffle sniffle, sob sob cry cry* wah the story is over... :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:( |
| XxLollipopxX 2008-02-18 ch 28, | abusethis was a really great story, i'm sad that it's over. But atleast ur making a sequal, yay. pippo princessx |
| BlackBeauty613 2008-02-17 ch 28, | abuseawesome ending! i loved this whole story! good luck with the sequa :) ~Rachel :) |