cool story

LOL Matrix reference. :D

Nice fic.

Ahhhh! Please continue! Please!

Well, what first, What's Nagi's connection to a concerned Ryoko, & What about Ayeka's Memmoriy loss! Well I would guess that Yugi will figure in the solutions to thes and other problems! Nuff Said!

Hmm. Not bad. Intriguing, very intriguing.

nice mix of everything

Having read Awakening with very little true knowledge of the series, though having attempted to be in an RPG based on it make a friend happy. So I have a slight knowledge, though it is slanted based on what he felt was important. ANYWAYS, This story is wonderful because it makes both the non-fan and the fan want to read. And it makes me want to find the show and watch it so I can see the characters that are used with in this story.

I'm liking it so far. It will be interesting to see what will happen next. Ssssoooooooo...CONTINUE ON PLEASE!

I've made fics similar to this, at least in the Ryoko/Nagi respect. I am thoroughly enjoying yours. Please get the next chapter out soon.

I like it! But...is there another part to this, like a prequal? -.-;

Oooooooooooooooooo.I like ie you have to finish.

I need more! Wheres the rest!MAKE MORE NOW !

TWITCH THE QUEEN OF CARDS COMMANDS IT!

It was Extremely good, you should continue.

this is really cool please finish

That was excellent! Stories of that quality are very few and far between, haha, actually, I think I could learn a few things from your stories if they are all like this. Keep it up! ((And please finish the story))