That was very gripping and entertaining. I found the easy acceptance of DG sleeping with Cain a little hard to accept, but otherwise I really enjoyed the descriptions, dialog, and emotional content. I loved that Glitch taught DG how to fight or 'dance.' It was a great addition, instead of having her default to some great magical feat. Thank you for the fun adventure.

'At some point in the future, could her sister end up her step-daughter-in-law? Didn’t they make movies about families like those attacking canoers?'

Omg, I had forgotten how much I love this fic. Jeb! and Az! and a puppy!

That makes me happy inside.

'And just like that, his tongue slipped in to introduce itself to hers. They got along, so she invited it in to stay awhile.'

Rofl, I just love the way you write.

You should write romance novels. Not kidding, you really should. I'd pay for it. If I didn't have to sleep I'd keep reading. This is my new favorite story.

*squee* Me's loved it! Wonderful story. Off to read the sequel!

I just had to jump in here and say BRA-VO for the lovemaking scene. It was beautiful, truthful and oh so sensual. You took DG through her first experience in a way that makes the readers ach right along with her, and you depicted Cain as the protective, ever so gentle and generous lover. And of course we can't deny that he is well endowed in all areas, can we.

I know how hard sex scenes can be, but you made this new, emotive and far from cliche'. Awesome job!

Now, I think I need a cold drink. *wink* Bravo again and keep up the amazing writing. You have a talented gift for creating the scene with your words in the reader's mind - and we readers love nothing more than having that!

I am purring from the contententment and happiness that your story has given me. I love the banter and snarking between all the characters, and you have them down pat.

I am off to read the second part of the story.

BTW...please, please, PLEASE finish your Labyrinth story. It is one of the best I've read, and it broke my heart to see that it hadn't been updated in several years.

I absolutely loved this story! I'm going to start reading the sequel ASAP.

That was so sweet and fun to read I like it them teasing each other
Maria

Omg, this fic is awesome! It was romantic and cute and made me grin like an idiot; it was exactly what I was looking for at the moment and lifted my mood tremendously. Thanks so much for writing it! I can't wait for the sequel.

Oh my WORD! that was... words cannot described the awesomeness of this story! you are awesome. HAHAHA. really this story was great. can't wait to read your other stories.

I loved it!! Haha, this was so...hot! *fans self* Anyhoo, you did an amazing job, and I can't wait for the second part. But... what about Jeb/Az? Gah! I can't wait!

I loved this story. It was wonderfully written. Can't wait to read the second part.

Oh. Nice. Very well written and now I'm salivating at the thought of a sequel. Is it coming soon?

It's over! Already? Just kidding!
Very nice ending, most definitely one of my favorite Tin Man stories.
Oh! A sequel, and possibly Glitch-centered, am I right? You've gotten my interest! Can't wait for it!
Well done with the fic. (Thunderous Applause!)