 silverangel83 2009-07-10 . chapter 6Please update soon! I just re-read the story and I can't wait to read more! You are one of the better authors out there. The characters really seem to be in character too. |
 Grinning Wolf 2009-07-02 . chapter 6Omg! This is such an adoringly cute story! The characters are really in-character and little Johnny is SO cute! I'm crazy glad you've updated recently-which means maybe this story hasen't been abadoned! Nothing worse than an abandoned good story! T~T
SO! Please update soon! Can't wait ta see how the plot's gonna move! xD |
 penny3 2009-06-25 . chapter 4Johnny's funny as a little kid.
Hm. I guess Ben really is "a little funny looking", but I've been a FF fan for so long, I don't really notice anymore. |
 KyliedaRock 2009-06-14 . chapter 6O_O you actually updated...
*flying-tackle-glomps*
That was so, so cute ^_^ seriously, I love your writing, it makes me squee with delight.
<3 |
 MagnusSpark 2009-06-14 . chapter 6Took yer damn time updating, didn't ya?!
I still think that this is one of the cutest stories! Liddle Johnny is so funny!
Keep writing! |
 Kitty 2009-06-14 . chapter 6 Currently squealing with happiness to see an update!
This was a good light-hearted chapter, especially between Reed and Johnny.
However like Reed I have a bad feeling that things may go wrong in the park.
Hope to see another update soon if possible. |
 Keiri Bradon 2009-04-12 . chapter 5Nothing is happening to Johnny...but nothing is happening to this story either. Please update!
--Keiri |
 Kitty 2008-09-19 . chapter 5 I love this story.
Johnny is so cute and your writing style is great.
Please update soon!! |
 LuffysAngel 2008-05-09 . chapter 5*faints*
Carie: I think she's dead.
Keiko:She's not dead idiot, she fainted...
Carie: Why?
Keiko: She fainted because she can't believe this story, which is wonderful by the way, hasn't been updated in so long.
Carie: Then she wants to see it updated?
Keiko: Yes, she does. Now say it with me Carie...
Carie: Alright... 1...2...3!
Keiko and Carie: Please upadate as soon as you can! ^_^ |
 Sarahbelle Saunders 2008-04-18 . chapter 5Oh, such a lovely plot! And perfect SPELLING, GRAMMER, and EVERYTHING ELSE THERE IS! This is AMAZING! Ohmigosh! I'll put this as my first ever Story Alert! YES!
S.S. |
 silverangel83 2008-03-04 . chapter 5Awesome story! I just love it! I can't wait to read more about 4-year-old Johnny and what Doom wants with him. |
 SetsuUzumaki 2008-02-29 . chapter 5ZOMG you updated ^.^ Yay! OMG what does Doom have planed for lil Johnny? Will Johnny be able to use his fire powers still? I can't wait to see what happens next I love this story so far. Its really hard to find good F4 stories ^.^ yours is really interesting and cute. |
 CheshireCatGrin3421 2008-02-23 . chapter 5plz update this soon! i had so much fun when reading it!!so plz continue!! |
 Silver Dog Demon 2008-02-06 . chapter 5Om my god, he's so cute! I just wanna hug him!
It was pretty freaky though - him seein' Doom. I loved the scene afterwards though - Sue is so motherly!
I can't wait for more, so please update soon! |
 crystal cerberus 2008-02-02 . chapter 5 that was good make doom make another shot at grabbing johnny and then sue or reed sees |