good story, shame that you have disabanded it, i would love to read more :)
LCP x

Please tell me this isn't abandoned. I can't wait to hear Harry's explanations and everyone's reactions.

This is great!

I hope you're going to update soon. I'd really like to know what's going to happen next.

update soon. please its really interesting. and i want to see how things play out with harry's new knowledge. by the way doesn't harry want to have Minerva M. and Severus when he explains his story, considering they were the ones who send him back.

Smaller more frequent!
Can't wait to see what happens next!

hope u update great story :)

I absolutely love 'Harry goes back in time' fics and I find this one has started off really well. As for the long waits, I don't mind them all that much, just as long as the story is not abandoned. I've seen so many good fics that the author just gives up on and I hate to start reading something and not seeing the end. But I do love your writing style and understand completely about Betas, I'm pretty much in the same place in that view, and I don't think your story is has any major grammar flaws. So, great start and I hope to see more of this.

I don't believe you need a beta. Your fic looks good! Please update again soon! :)

Wonderful start!
I am looking forward to where you will go with this.
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Great story and I sincerely hope that you will continue with it. At least this time Harry will be sharing his experiences with others instead of trying to do everything himself as he often does in these types of stories. I look forward to reading... and reviewing... more of this hurry and post more soon.

oh i really really really like this idea! keep up the great work and update soon please?!

much love,
from LAoR

You have a knack for writing time-travel. (I LOVE time travel fanfics, I read every one I can click on) Your story flows well and does not seem "forced" like a couple authors I have come across.

I like the way it goes to the end of the 4th year rather than Harry as a baby or the thousand or so that take place right at 11.

Have you tried using html breaks ( < br > ) for your large paragraph breaks? (Sorry, just trying to be helpful)

Hello,

I am very interested in this story! I'm surprised that someone so young could write so well--Bravo!!


Please keep writing. By the way, I vote for long chapters with few updates.

I also enjoyed your other story, "HP Year 4: Voldemort Returns."

Your story is great, you should continue writing it. Unlike other cliche stories about Harry's time travel into the past, yours began during the tournament which is a nice change from Harry returning back to childhood. I hope you'll keep updating this.

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.



Thank you,



Terri