This is the best story I've ever read. I now really like the Fierce Deity and Zelda romance. Chapter 17 was sad though, I didn't want the Fierce Deity's soul to be set free, *sigh* but as long as it makes happy. :)

You know it would be cool if the drummer was Link's dad.

I thought this chapter was perfect.

I MUST READ MORE.

NOOO LINK!

I just love your writing

SO MUCH

It would be an awesome fan fic if u wrote of one about majora and someone else, like Malon or something, but give him the body of the creature he has the mask put on, like for Hylians turn him/(it) hylian, and if on a keaton make 'im an indigo and a whole bunch of oother colors in strange patterns...

... ok, he's supposed to be really nuts and man-eating insane mutation weird thing that throws rainbows at you. NEVER MIND. I'm nuts. Is that a good idea? Probably not. Meh. GREAT JOB ON THIS, it made me almost cry at the end. It felt like I was zelda, holding a dying white giant that lost most of it's time because of a drummer, that I was the one that practically let him die, though zelda didn't in truth just let him die. It was so sad, I literally almost cried. It is HARD to make me even come anywhere NEAR making me cry. I swear I shed an actual tear.

Can you please write another with FDxZelda and you know not kill Oni Link pretty please with sugar on top :)

The last paragraph of this epiologue is a wonder ! It fits so perfectly this fanfiction, I'm amazed ! Do you mind if I quote it like that :

"And so I leave it to you to decipher which you believe to be the most creditable tale between the white king or the lethal warrior. I, will guide you no further for this is the freedom of your heart." (Perfect Soldier 01 - White Eyes)

Well, that, but in French. (I'd really like to know, please)

The ending is not very fullfiling and the last image of the trio could have used some movement, as Zelda taking Link's hand or him coming to her. And the fact that the two (Link and the F.D similarities and bond that felt so spetion, the fact that they body is so similar hasn't beeing explaing in a convincing or pertinent way enough I think. But as I write this, I still am too lazy to read chapters 14, 15, 16 and the whole epilogue, so maybe I'll come later and give another review...

Thank you for this big and rish story.

I meant to ask are gonna do a fierce deity story like this?

One word man. Amazing. This is a great story, though I have seen better. Not saying that this is anything less than great, I've just read some incredible stories :p I'm kinda jealous, 155 reveiws for one story is something to be proud of. I'm working on my first story ever (not just for this website, first ever official writing outside of school. Don't be surprsied, I'm only like 13). It's a Metroid Halo crossover fanfic, and I'm really nervous about what people will think, or if I'll get any reviews. Maybe you could read what I've got so far and give me some tips? Anyway, great story, and I really like your endings, and the letters were cool too.

Beautifully done, I think that closed it all off nicely.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Nice story here. Very well written and thought out. I know it's really hard to deal with different times and making things match up. A couple typos here and there, but aren't we all plagued by the typo-demons?

My only curiosity is where the Fierce Deity's strength went. With a name and history like he's got, you'd think it'd take the beasts of hell to hold him back. Then again, what strength does a warrior have when they have nothing to fight for? Is that where you're going with it?

I'm generally not a fan of first person, but you pull it off very well! And mad skills on descriptions and explanations. You manage a nice broad vocabulary while not making things clunky with some really obscure terms.

Yeh..

LOVE IT! : )

I must admit, the letters do reveal some of the things that were clouded for me, so I'm glad you posted them! I hope you make a sequel concerning Link and Zelda! :3 Amazing story, and your writings are fantastic. Keep up the great work!

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*cries* That was the saddest story I've read! But I already knew FD was gonna have to leave... I'm happy that Link and Zelda were together at the end! Wonderful job.

Oh no! Are they gonna use the Song of Time on Fierce Deity? I hope Link comes back soon. Also, it's pretty cool how you based this on the MM Manga! Nice chapter!