This is a very good story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Oh please...you must finish it you must! I love it.

This is a very good story with a lot of potential! Please, Please continue soon!

Hey, I really miss this story. I come and check almost every day to see if you've undated. I really do love the whole story idea. If you're ina writers block I can try and help you, if not, then I can still try to help you. LOL. I just can't wait.

Oh man, I can't wait to read more. I've been following this story scince you started writing it. You HAVE to write more, it's awesome.

Allen

I really love this story! Can we expect an update soon? I hope so, because I am hooked.

*dies*

Your Carter is just so adorable.

Wow, it just keeps getting better. The new Ch. 3 is awesome! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Interesting. I had never pictured Newkirk as a "Dad".

One thing you might want to do is check for "dropped words. I do the same thing when I write. I think, we think so fast our fingers can't keep up on the key board. It's not a big thing. It's easy to fill in the blank but for a more professional presentation an extra proof read would be good. I sometimes have someone else read my work and check for punctuation and flow.

I'm enjoying your story. Don't make us wait to long for Chapter 4! And thanks for sharing!

Wow, this story has got me really interested. One question though, i know you're rewriting it. but are you gonna post the rest soon. i'm really eager to find out what is gonna happen. is there anywhere else i can go to read the rest? Just wondering, Hope to read the rest soon. Sky

Yeah! *faints from excitment* this is my favourite HH story. I am so thrilled you updated. thank you thank you thank you thank you, how many more times o i need to say it? thank you!

Hey, no fair! I got an author alert for you in my e-mail that said you'd written an eleventh chapter...you have no idea how my heart sank when I saw what was actually there...:-) Oh, well. I look forward to your various revamps/additions over the summer!

Still a loyal fan - :)

Nikita

The story is great, is more coming? It doesn't seem finished and I wanna know what happens.

What ever happened to this story? Did it die? I really enjoyed this story and i miss it. Please write more as soon as you can.

I 'ave read this story before, but please update. I want to know what 'appens.