That was really sweet and deep, really, really deep, in fact. (I could almost relate to those feelings of theirs).

And your writing was superb, I had to look in the dictionary to understand their thoughts and actions (yeah, my english is not perfect, buts...)

Great job!

ZOMG, you write so well, and this is a Taikobou/Youzen. I LOVE THAT PAIRING!

Aw...this has got to be one of the sweetest, most well written Houshin fics I've read! It's awesome! I wish I could write like that. XD

This is my fav Taikoukou/Youzen that I've read. I really liked the part about his gloves a lot.

I love the subtlety of this piece. Taikoubou is characterized fine, in my opinion. Awesome work. Please write more soon!

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That was a really great fic...I like your reasoning for Taikoubou and his gloves.

KAWAII! Me and my friend just finished watching Soul Hunter! I was so excited, hoping to have a RaishishinxNataku fanfic, TaikoubouxYouzen! But when I look all over I find only one! ;.; It's so sad! But I love this fic because TaikoukouxYouzen are me fav couple! NOT TO MENTION THEY ARE BOTH BISHOUNENS! n.n!

It's a really cute piece.

beautiful! This story was great. I really like how you've drawn Youzen x bou out.

XD Kawaaiii! Youzen x Taikoubou rocks! But I still can't understand why the author had to give them such long names.

OOH! *swoons* That's so SWEET. Especially liked the characterizations (I have never read Houshin Engi in my life, so couldn't call anyone OOC). Very subtle, very delicate style. XD XD. More! MORE!

FINALLY! A Taikoubou and Youzen fanfic! It was a bit OOC, though. ;;

Kyaaaaa! So cuteeeeeeeeee... v *melt to the ground* Your story is so sweet. Plus, they're my all time fav couple. Please write some more!

Hello, I like it so much! Keep it up!

Can I have the permission of putting your fic on my HP? If yes, please send it to me by txt file.

*_*

I'm *so* drooling. Lovely job, dahling.