good story! please update soon!

poor leah.. i dont like the way what she decided to do sounds though. shes just digging herself a deeper hole by acting as a true slytherin. now her brother really wont like her, and neither will her parents for that matter

interesting

That chapter was just amazing!! You write so incredibly well and I could completly feel your characters personalities. It was smooth and well moving, not at all hard to read, I will definitly continue to read this

I absolutely love this story! I can tell you are headed somewhere good with this, and your first chapter, while like a monolouge (sorry bout spelling) is very intriging and has me hooked! i will definitly be keeping an eye on this story add more when you can please!

This is interesting, so don't let the infamous Plot Bunny run away.

wow, this coul be an interestinf story.just go on update soon

wow, that was pretty intense. i can't believe james would do something like that. i mean i know he hates slytherin, but that's his sister. i just don't think he'd do that. but i am liking this story and i want to read more

this a really good intro.
some ideas from me are that you could say who the lover is and show what James did to her.
but it is YOUR story, so do what you want, but this is a really good intro. i hope it gets even better.

i like it so far it was very intriguing to me, and keep it up ^_^