I loved this fic! You had Katara and Zuko perfectly in character. This sounds like something that would have happened between The Western Air Temple and The Firebending Mastars.

Oh.
em.
gee.
:o
I LOVE YOU!
This is amazing, absolutely poetic :)
YAY FOR ZUTARA ANGST.
I hope you continue. :D
If not, oh well. :/
Love anyways :)

Very intense indeed. Nice going (non-sarcastic)

I really like Toph and Zuko's almost sort of friendship in this. It's nice - and Katara being irrationally hateful, that's... very accurate.

Wow.
No, really.
WOW WOW WOW!

AW! Thats so sweet. :) Really nice. :D

This is so fantasic. I loved it. The atmosphere is so powerful and Katara's hate is so raw it feels almost tangible.

Wicked job! The western air temple was an amazing episode and i love the fanfic you did here!

That was beautiful. I loved everything about it.



I cried. :C

woo, i liked this. :3

i loved the fic update soon please ^__^

My heart was racing. Your fic was really amazing!
Katara freaks me out a little right now, I hope she returns to her normal self.
Oh, and I specially loved the interaction between Zuko and Toph, I imagine them as sibilings or something like that. So nice!
All the characters were perfectly portrayed, It's been a long time since I've read something as good as this, but I get the sesation that the story should continue.
Well, bye!

This is definitively a VERY interesting beginning. In fact, I hope that you continue it. Ah, the angst! :) Great job. :P

I gotta say this was amazing. You have a great ability to create a incredible atmosphere and more importantly your word choice and ability to write each character's perspective was all kinds of awesome. I'm honestly not a Zutara fan, in fact I really didn't understand the fan base for it since they got very little solo interaction with each other outside of like two episodes, but this story made me think I'll probably have to re-evaluate the coupling. You created a very real explanation for Katara's outburst after the Western Air Temple, one I never even considered. Thanks for giving fans of the series a incredible glance into a perspective we might not have thought of. Kudos.

That was a wonderful fic, I loved its essence. Getting over betrayal is hard enough... Kudos, the emotion and character development were wonderful. The resolution in the end was executed wonderfully... Though I must say there was a lull in the middle.

As for writing, I have to say that it can be cleaned a bit further. There are few grammatical errors. May I suggest on getting a beta/editor?

Good luck and kudos again.