This was amazing. It was wonderful and powerful and it really dug down to the bottom of the relationships. I loved the repetition in Sora's wondering about what Axel thinks of Riku. It makes it more powerful somehow, like Sora knows it's continuing to hurt Axel, but can't bring himself to not hurt him. I don't know. I love this though, and I'm favouriting it.

This was so beautiful it honestly felt like it HURT...
It was so RAW, the pure emotions, the rush, the heat, the moments that trailed on...
Amazing.

Jaffa
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this is... just... wow
amazingly done
very well structured and the emotions are just magnificent
and thank you so much for the open ending... it is just beautiful

thank you for creating such a piece for fans around

A lovely story, you write very well, and such a unique plot to boot!

The ending was interesting, I never would have expected that

Loved it (:

AH. Ow, you just tore my heart out and stomped on it. :'( This was AMAZINGLY good. (Also, ow, some more.) This is short, but it conveys an incredible amount of emotion, and it just tore me apart. Great job. I don't even know how to say how gut-wrenching I found this, and how wonderful, but thank you for sharing it all the same.

That was amazing. It was powerful and showed a lot of talent.

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wow long time no to see a ghost history in the perfect Ann Rice style... like Lasher...

great great... I love it.. it make cry..

XD buy I cant understand why you end in thayt way... [ I had the feeling of more and more with this...] :p

anyway a good piece ^o^

Wow. That was powerful. It kind of suggests that Axel is Riku's Nobody in this, if that's even possible. I really enjoyed this. It's one of those rare gems that's hard to find. =]

I've always thought that it would be so easy if only Axel was Riku's nobody. Then everything would be solved and Roxas and Axel could be together through Sora and Riku. I'm glad that you brought it up, even if it wasn't completely to my theory. And you've made me realize that Sora and Axel, under different circumstances, would probably have been very good friends. I loved this fic, it was really beautiful. And I think you caught Axel's personality perfectly, it seems just the way he is in the game, emotional. So, thank you.

Whoa. This is amazing. You truely have a talent.

This is a beautiful fic, no doubt. c: Your writing is AMAZING, and man, this is really heartwretching. ;-; Keep it up!

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just dropping a line here too as this is utterly awesome. +faves

This was wonderfully written
It's sad and unexpected, I love it...
It makes me want more. c:

Ah, there's just something about your style that manages to cut deeply into me, as a reader. It's just satisfying to read. This was no exception. While it isn't the first fic I've read of this sort, not by a long shot, it surpasses the rest in leaps and bounds. You write them like real people, and we love that.

This is a very will written story and an interesting concept. I very much enjoyed reading this. Very good.