 The Misty Forest 2009-10-26 . chapter 3This fic captured my heart! I'm a fan of PW and FMA, and this fic blends it perfectly! They're just it character, and the taste of FMA is just sweet inside the PW world XD
There are many things that I want to say to you, but I just say what's important(well to me anyway)
Hope you update soon!
TMF |
 IdiotsApprentice 2009-08-08 . chapter 3I'm in love. You have combined two of my most loved things into one loveable fanfiction. Thank you.
It was EXACTLY like playing PW again, except with FMA goodness incorporated. I got so into it at one point that I actually took the stylus from my DS and used it to click the mouse to scroll down the page.
...Yeah, that's a little pathetic.
But I seriously sing your praises for this fic. Perfectly in-character which I'd imagine is particularly difficult when having characters who haven't even met before interacting with each other. The traditional Phoenix Wright layout was also perfectly executed, the first person narrative too carried out to a tee. It's like playing Phoenix Wright all over again!
I'm so happy. |
 ChrissyViolet 2009-08-03 . chapter 3you did a really good job at blending them together and its fun to read :) please update soon :) |
 Xenophili 2009-07-20 . chapter 2In chapter two I was just a little disappointed. I was really hoping to read about Phoenix's reaction to seeing alchemy done right before his eyes for the first time. Phoenix's character really is surprised easily, but he took the whole matter way too calmly. There wasn't even a reaction at all. Please fix it, I really want to read about Phoenix being dumbfounded. Also Maya and Pearls' reaction. I'm pretty sure Maya would have the biggest one of them all, and then Ed's reaction to their reaction. He would be showing off to no end nd be dragged out of the room or something. |
 Sable Katze 2009-06-13 . chapter 38D
You updated!
It took a while for me to notice, but you updated!
>w<
YES!
It's an awesome chapter!
: D
Can't wait to see what happens next!
(I mean, I remember the plot, but I still can't wait! ) |
 Romani-chan 2009-05-16 . chapter 3Phoenix Wright+FMA=the perfect combination! I love this story so far, please update soon :) |
 Wishes I was Human 2009-05-11 . chapter 3I loved chapter two the best! I hope I get to see Hughes and Gumshoe working side by side! They look like they could get along grandly! I can't wait for more! Update ASAP! |
 Laniessa Rosewindi 2009-04-29 . chapter 2Luffs it. Only problem--
Amestris isn't on earth.
XDD
But the story is nice. |
 sillysinny 2008-08-17 . chapter 3wow, you updated!! A great twist in the plot, with the blackmail note and the disappearance of Roy's gloves...the wait is making me go insane! >v< update soon! |
 Skyler Maepa 2008-07-18 . chapter 3Being a fan of both the PW and FMA universes, I quite enjoy this story. I'm usually a skeptic of crossovers, but your method of bringing the two together worked quite well. You also stayed very true to the nature of the characters, but I did feel that Ed's comment about Mustang being guilty was a bit out of character. Perhaps more will be revealed in time? Also, the more description, the better (within reason). As my Creative Writing teachers keep saying, show, don't tell, which is understandably hard with the PW story format. Excellent work, I hope to see more soon. |
 Link Guru 2008-07-14 . chapter 3Alright, Pheonix is out of the gate strong. Poor Gumshoe, no one ever gives him any respect. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
 mrawgirl09 2008-07-14 . chapter 3YES! FO" REALL?!?!? I MISSED THIS SOO MUCH I ALMOST SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THIS ON MY INCOMING LIST! I LOVE YOU!! I CAN"T WAIT TO READ IT!< i didn't read it yet cause i'm not allowed... so i'm moving it to my MP3 and reading it there... i missed you and Turnabout Alchemy SO MUCH@! friggin... i've been wondering about this for a while now... about 4 weeks, actually!! THANKS! LOVES! |
 Alandra-Noir 2008-07-14 . chapter 3This is great so far! Your characters are written very well, and there's no OOC stuff happening! And I can see this playing out just how the games do... Ed getting mad and shouting... The shocked look the Judge gets... And poor Gumshoe and his kicked-puppy expression. Lol, and Phoenix's little thoughts... They're perfect!
I can't really think of anything you need to improve, to be honest. Just keep writing! Unfortunately, I'm rather hooked on it now... |
 Link Guru 2008-05-27 . chapter 2This is a cool sounding story. I have onr things to say though. First is that from what I know of FMA Ed would lose it imediatly after being called short. I don't think he'd give them a warning. Other then that this is a cool start and I can't wait to see how things turn about. |
 Sable Katze 2008-05-26 . chapter 2Barely beta'd because you forgt to send it to me!
D<
...Well, I can't beta today, anyway.
You done with your science packet, yet?
I'm not!
XD
Yay for updating!
::hugs:: |