This is really great story... The best mortal kombat fanfic on this site i think. i have read a lot of them and found only one better - and i'm very demanding.. ;)

I can't begin to describe how much I was craving for a decent ending to MKC. I've read many, but yours is the first that fits the bill.

Great plot and characterization. The style could use a polish (those POVs, adverbs, and transitions -- can't write with them, can't write without them), but you're well on your way to professional writing. Thank you for a much-needed sense of closure.

~ Morvan

Wow. This piece was excellent. I think its my favorite what-happened-after-Conquest story of the ones I read. Luckily for me, Conquest came on about 8 pm and right after my wrestling show lol.

My only thing I want to comment on is Kitana. We hear about her once, and I'd like to know how she gets freed and such. Anyhow, I'm probably the only one who wonders it. That being said, I liked it a lot and am hopeful you'll be a frequent contributing writer!

Well, I must give you major kudos for writing such an amazing piece. It was so in character and I loved every chapter.

Aw, poor Kimari. :(

An abrupt ending. Maybe an epilogue? I'm curious what Rayden's doing on his 'vacation'.

Overall, great story! Wish there were more like it.

Siro and Taja too? I'm surprised, the intial idea that Shao Kahn would only keep the champion alive made sense to me. But hey, this is a good thing!

Now where's that Elder Goddess when they need her?

Switching POVs, I have that problem too. Awkward transitions, ugh.

Looks like Kimari gave Rayden a bit of good news just in time...he didn't seem to be doing so well. There IS only so much a human body can take, even if you've got the stubbornness of a god.

Ah Rayden, so many women looking out for you.

And...Kung Lao? :O

Soul jars, interesting.

I find your characters very realistic and in-line with the series.

"hair the color of clouds"

Ooh nice, I like that.

Ah, finally a MK: conquest fic ^^
You can't imagine how grateful I am for that - the end of that show has been taunting me for quite some time now and has finally, *finally* found its master :)

Kung Lao is still alive...man this story is getting seriously addictive =D
I love your work =)

I can truly appreciate this fic, as a MK fan. Thanks for the great work and I hope to see more soon.

Well, you're free to indulge in a continuation of Conquest because I don't ever think a second season of this highly underrated show will see the light of day. As for the story itself, I found it pretty good. Nicely written, good descriptions and characterizations, plus Rayden finally got what was coming to him. lol

Yay Conquest!! =D
I was too young to see it on TV [did it actually air in Australia?] but I have the DVD series.

Interesting slant on the aftermath, but very, very good. I expected Shao Kahn to keep Rayden alive to see him suffer. I can't wait until the next chapter =)