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Poke-the-Jello
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Ah loved it! Nice take on Kingdom Hearts from amnesia!riku's perspective. Especially loved how it was somewhat undisnified, everything has such morbid connotation...♥
The Blue Girl
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
I love all your stories. They inspire me so! This particular one I had to have read at least ten times. Saying I'm obsessed with it would probably be a little weird... and an understatement... oh well. Not sweet, not cute, not undeniably sexy - distressing, waiting, peaceful, war; all very well written together in here. Very good harmony. I love the characters portrayed by you.
bonjourmeadow
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Oh my, that was fantastic.
The quote towards the beginning, about Sora's name being Sky was brilliant. Really, honestly. I felt my stomach flutter when reading that. This story follows the game so perfectly, it's very clever and well-written.
Thank you.
Michi P.
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
Oh, once again that was amazing. I liked the style of this piece, it was very well written!

~Michi P.
KhObessed4Ever
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Just beautiful. I don't know what to say the story flowed word after word after word. You have a brilliant writing style.I hope you continue to write stories as beautiful as this one.
MidnightMews
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
That was very beautiful. I loved it. It was mythical and magical in the same way that it was sad and dark, with an ending that closes neatly and storybook-like. Brilliant! I'm glad I came across this. It was so easy to picture the coldness of the war, Riku's torn emotions and Sora's heroism. Wonderful work!
keysandhearts
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
That was amazingly beautiful! Your portrayal of the characters was brilliantly executed.

I love this

*adds to favorites*
DeNiSaY60
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
In the beginning it was depressing, but I like it. And when Sora came from the sky, I was listening to Sanctuary and I was amazed at how it fit in the scene so much.

And this confuses me XD lol So, Riku forgot everything?... Oh okay. Now I understand!... A little
Keona Raynalise
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
WOW! that was amazing! love how you you made it... well how u put in things from kingdom hearts 2! it was awesome!
Chifaes
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
I may have stopped breathing for second towards the end and I may be crying at the moment. That was so beautiful and lovely and the way you wrote it. Thank you.
XbuttonsX
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Whoa. Just, whoa. I have heard of your before about a million times but always do I run out of time before happening apon your fics. Browsing last night and I find something of yours and I must read. And, you don't realize how amazing it was that I did. This is, just, pure amazement. A new level of pro has been reached. I don't know how emotionaly that ending was supposed to be, but it had me crying. So much so that I needed to leave the comptuer for a few minutes to regain my bearings. The portrayal, the passion, the emotion ... all make me feel. Please, keep this work up. You are far better then half the published authors out there.
DooBaaDee
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
I love the line when Sora says "centuries". It broke my heart to see that kind of love.
Cheska
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
*in awe* I'm happy the other worlds are still alive, and now in peace. And it's cool how Sora was sealed away with Donal and Goofy.

Centuries? That is a long time.

I loved it. Gorgeous one-shot. :D
Delmasca
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
This was astoundingly beautiful. I feel like I was just read the hieroglyphs off an a slab of stone by an old anthropologist/scribe.

This was gorgeously realized. I loved it. Quietly dark, nothing extra, just perfection.
DMFAZINA
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
oh, that really got to me, i almost started crying. it was amazingly writte. :) thanks for writing it.
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