|Reviews for Haunting us|
| Agent of the Divine One 12/30/07 . chapter 10
It's all crammed together. You have great ideas, but they aren't expressed as well as they could be.
But it was this way for everyone at some point. And I do look forward to seeing your writing style improve as you continue to publish your work.
And if you ever need help, don't hesitate to ask. I would be glad to help give your ideas form.
| lala3553 12/17/07 . chapter 3
love it keep writeing