You really made me cry. This story was beautiful. It was sad. I hate drama. I love it. Contradicting much huh? ^^
Anyway that was really wonderful. But you can't let it like that! That's too... depressing. Poor characters, there is nobody who ends up happy!
I love happy endings and even if this story is beautiful like that (I don't cry often over story, they must be really sad and well-written for that), if someday you write a sequel, I'll be more than overjoyed to read it ^^

What?!
You really should continue it!
It was really good!

I can't stand the way Sasuke treated Naruto in ur fic disenchanted. I felt like what happened to Sasuke in this fic was justice, payback. Thanks for writing it.

I can't believe i haven read this earlier!~ but great story!! i'm unsettled after reading.. ah... the sad ending just pricked me! wonderful characterisation !!

please. you got to continue this. you cant leave the story like this. naruto and sasuke should up with each other.

Hello,

Now on to what I have to say:
Haha! Take that Sasuke, Naruto left you. Consider that revenge!
=]

Now, seriously: Are they going to get together? Can I make the end what I want it to be, in my own imagination? It's so sad when people let misunderstandings and miscommunication tear their relationships apart.

Anyway, it had a impact on me. So, thank you for your good work.

Dani-ko

god this story is so freaking powerful
it makes my heart ache in a good way
i would like to see you write a sequal just because im a sap for happy endings and open-ended stories give me a head ache from all the possible outcomes my mind comes up with haha
but also this story is good by itself because its so tragically beautiful
either way props to you

OMG this is so awesome, beautifully written and dramatic
~sob my poor sasuke and your * mouth
if you have time i wish u wrote a sequel
thanx

Ah...-basks in the talent-.
That was actually pretty sad though. I was really hoping it would be a happy ending, lol XD Pity..BUT NONETHELESS! Love X3 Great idea with the continued 'mistake' theme, very interesting! I was hanging out to know what his next one would be! Loved number thirteen ;) I'm guessing the marriage didn't go ahead?? I really liked the slight AU-ish-ness, and I thought Sasuke and Naruto's relationship was built very believably considering. And the humor XD Oh. You make me laugh.
So you wrote this quite a while ago it seems, but for what it's worth, I would love to know what happens next. You've got me thoroughly enthralled, so from this reader at least a volume two is certainly supported o.<
Great fic. I loved it!

I hate you for writing so well. I'm not sure why I felt compelled to read this story, but I like your writing and the summary definately caught my attention. I teared up when I read this one shot and any story that gets me to cry (which I almost did) or tear up (which I did) deserves praise.

Please continue to write the way you do, I love your style.

I don't care! Bloody hell where is the continuation of this? :)

Oh my gosh you are so cruel if you plan to leave this here and I see it was published last year :O Now would be a great time to update :)

Ouch it can't have ended like that, sniffles :)

Yeah..I figured they were getting married when Naruto asked Sasuke if he loved her. Sasuke was such a bastard..Geez..it's not like Naruto did anything bad..and how unfair to Sakura! Anyways! Great fanfic!! It was really well written! My only criticism is that sometimes it was kind of confusing as to who was doing what since you used pronouns a lot. You showed their emotions really well. I could feel my heart breaking for Naruto =)

i have nothing to say, but be sure that there is love in my eyes for this fic. dude! yeah! continue it plese!

I read it thoroughly from first word to last, and it was amazing!
I got that Sasuke and Sakura were getting married easily.
You made me angst.
I need fluff now.
That was amazing.
that was amazing.
I'm to lazy to give you a good reveiw and point out why exactly I loved it and am favoriting it. I'm hungry...

Sequels rock, and this leaves so much open for one.

OMFG! OMFG! OMFG! OMFG! OMFG! THIS IS THE MOST FREAKIN AWESOME FIC I'VE READ IN A LONG LONG LONG LONG LONG LONG TIME! OMG! I ABSOLUTELY L-O-V-E-D IT!

I love how you kept incoorporating the mistakes! The thirteenth one was PRICELESS! I just LOVED the style of writing! It just really gets to you, and brings out the emotion and WOW! I was just...wow...I swear there were times when I almost cried! It's perfect...absolutely perfect!

And the lemon was HOTT! No worries!! It was smokin! ^_^

OMG! YOU SO HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! I DEMAND A SEQUEL! ANOTHER CHAPTER! ANYTHING! AS LONG AS IT'S CONTINUED! I swear I'll die if you don't continue this! it's just screaming for a continuation! It's saying, "Please! The fans LOVE me! My plot needs to be resolved! Please, oh please continue me! I beg of you!" Lolz!

I LOVE this fic...I really do...I'm gonna reccomend it to all my friends...it's that awesome! EXCELLENT JOB!

Peace Out! ^_^