I discovered your MTR fanfics for the first time last week and I've been reading them like crazy since then. I don't think there's anyone in this fandom who can write the characters as well and with as much depth as you.

With that said, I think this story has to be one of my favorites. I love your concept on time-travel (though I had to stop and think of it for a moment to really understand it. I think my brain might have exploded in the process). I think it will be interesting to see how the storyline unfolds and I'm dying to see the character's reaction to this unusual situation.

I really do love this story. I can't wait to see how it ends.

After readind this for a second time, i have to say that it was enjoyable. However, I was a little confused. Did Lewis's awakening happen before or after the movie? And did Wilbur already know what was going to happen? Also Wilbur's motives seem a bit fuzzy as well.

I really liked this story. Is there any hope of you finishing it, or has the inspiration moved on? I want to know how things work out between Lewis and Wilber. How will Lewis take seeing Wilber again after he finds out what actually happened to him? What will Wilber do when he finds out who he is in comparison to Lewis? And Fanny! What will Fanny do with the teenage version of her long lost boyfriend?

I've never seen the Robinsons, but this seems interesting. ^^ I like Atticus. Atticus's cool.

Holy crap. You are made of genius and win.

This story may have been really, really depressing, but it was totally worth the tears.

God, I can't even imagine trying to write anything this complicated. :) Kudos.

May you please continue this. I have a good idea. Lewis meets his family in the next chapter, but doesn't know then because he thinks he's in his own time, and Wilbur has unexplained flashbacks of him and Lewis together. Just an idea. Also, if Atticus was real, I would want him to be my boyfriend

You are flipping awesome.

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I'd write more, but I don't know how to give my thanks for letting a person like me read such a story, with such a well-written, logically put storyline that is has a "this-is-the-realworld" quality to it.

Hmm, something like the original fairytales and Disney's "all-is-happysunshinesandrainbows!" movies.

Thank you! And keep writing. (:

Gosh, this story's amazing. Wilbur sure messed thing's up,( even if it wasn't intentional ),and everyone's paying the price yet again.
I hope Lewis renews his friendship with Wilbur (and maybe more...),
but it'll probably be difficult with the way the situation is.
Update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat here!

H-holy *crap*, but this is intense. D: I realize Disney's version of time-travel logic doesn't work - but THIS IS SO DEPRESSING. UGH. DISNEY WOULD CALL THIS BLASPHEMY.

... which makes it so very interesting to read. :D :D :D

But, still.

DEPRESSED.

You know, I can just imagine Atticus having Cornelius use the memory scanner to relay what happened to him, and have it show the events of chap. 1, starting at "The f-future is different than you know, Lewis." That would certainly throw a monkey wrench into the works. Anyway, I hope you update soon!

I think you've done a wonderful job, the way you handles the time travel paradoxes. (In the back of my head I hear Chico Marx saying, "Why a pair o' ducks. Why not a pair o' geeses?")

Oh man, I just love this fic so much. What a twist 0.0 I am definatly keeping up with this story, and absulutly -love- you for writing it! Good job, thanks!

Aw, poor-- well, everyone, really. I think I was going to say Franny first, but Atticus has got it pretty rough too. Lewis is obviously in need of a good amount of pity, but I expected that pretty much from the start. I dunno what I thought was going to happen to Wilbur though; I'm still not sure. Wonder how he's going to handle it, some random guy claiming to be his best friend. They're about the same age now, right? I imagine Wilbur would think of Lewis as being older though, since he grew up looking at him like that. Then again, who knows? (Other than you, of course.)
Another thing-- what happened to all the bajillion reviews this thing deserves? Che. Stingy people. Hm. Kinda wish there was more I could do in repayment for these wonderful stories you share with us.
Erm, anyway... It's probably too late for me to be rambling so much. I'll try to keep the rest short:
Thank you for the update ^_^ and please keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to the next bit you decide to share with us, whatever it might be.
Have a good day!
-Eloarei

Oh, MAN, that was intense. It was totally confusing, and the details of what was going on escaped me, but I get the general idea of what's happening. I think. I hope. I'll definitely keep going on this, but for now I think my brain needs a break. Maybe some nicely mindless lemons, what do you think?

Oh man, this story is brutal! Brutal! For the record I think Atticus is a fine OC, and just the sort that makes me hopeful for OCs. God, I can't get over all of the Lewis-torture. But this is a damn good story, and one that I'm definitely going to keep up with :)

And yeah, the time traveling in this movie made my head hurt too (as it normally does in movies that involve time travel). You're doing a hell of a good job making it a bit more sensical and a little less migraine inducing.