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| Neptune's Violin 2008-06-28 ch 16,  | abuseXD The ending is so hilarious!...at least...in my opinion... |
| Alex 2008-06-12 ch 16, anon. | abuseNo... I was gonna write about superpowered ALPHA force lmao. Nice ending... loved the invisable Li!! write a sequel. |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-08 ch 16, | abuseWow so weird, it's reminds me of the Fantastic Four. Very nice epilogue but it didn't really fit in with the story that much. I was expecting cancer but then I guess that would lead to another story and it was just an epilogue. Thanks for writing it! |
| spinkle22 2008-06-08 ch 16, | abuseHaha, great! Thanks for clearing that up! Good story, by the way. Spinky :D |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-05-22 ch 15, | abuseThis was a very Alpha Forcy ending. With not everyone surviving but Alpha Force try and shield the kids from the deaths. Plus the police coming as the ending was very good. I loved this story, it was brilliant! |
| lepidopteran 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abuseawsome story! hope you continue writing more! |
| spinkle22 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abuseHey, cool chapter. I didn't think it was abrupt or anything - but I would have liked to know what happened with the drug in Hex in the end! I'm guessing it just wore off? Anyway, this was a really good story. Spinky :D |
| Elledreamer 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abuseThat was good, nice to have a little more! I really liked it! Elle xx |
| lepidopteran 2008-04-27 ch 14, | abuselove it! original premise and awsome characterisation! keep up the good work! |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-23 ch 14, | abuseAw it's a shame you've lost inspiration for this fic, it is really good. I loved the tension here! I really want to know how it ends though and I'm sure whatever it is, it will be good! Elle xx |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-03-22 ch 14, | abuseThat's so sad when she said, 'we're the evidence'! Also now I'm terrified of the ending because you made it sound like someone's going to die! I really like this fic and I would really like it if no one died please? |
| spinkle22 2008-03-21 ch 14, | abuseCool, good chapter! Update soon :P |
| x.Who.Dares.Wins.x 2008-03-17 ch 13, | abuseoh mae Dr Farrell yn nasty! hehe poor Li - what with your story, and mine, she won't be very happy! ^-^ thank you for updating! |
| spinkle22 2008-03-17 ch 13, | abuseHey, nice chapter! Gosh, everyone seems to be torturing Li now! It was good, though - can't wait for an update :D |
| Seeker Kze 2008-03-17 ch 13, | abuseThat was a good chapter. Lol. Loved it when Li went off her head. Its like something I would do :P. Great story line too. Hope you UD soon |