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hotaru89
2008-09-10
ch 5,
abuseOh.My.God! MAJOR CLIFF HANGER!

So mean!

You MUST update soon! I am desperately wanting to know what the results are, and I think it's ridiculous that I'm getting so worked up over this. But really, ah!

He better not have HIV... I hope he doesn't, ugh!

Great, great job on this, it's really been making me sad, but it's also really good.
Love-of-all-Anime
2008-08-23
ch 5,
abuseUPDATE UPDATE AND MARE UPDATE
RikuSora
2008-07-29
ch 5, anon.
abuseTwelve-point arial font? Isn't it Times new romas?
lol
sorry, I coudn't help myself:D
Im reading this story and its turning out so good! I can't wait to read the rest soon! its really herd to find stories featuring with sickness of HIV or AIDS, its pretty good to read these type of stuff, including when one experience a time of a loss of someone with AIDS like my uncle (rest in peace assure!, Im sure he would have enjoyed reading this, since we both passed in this tipe of hard time:)
Brie92
2008-07-27
ch 5,
abuseOMG why did you end it THERE!!? Does he have it? Does he not? AH! I want answers!
PaygeV
2008-07-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseThis story is so perfectly, insanely sweet! I actually almost cried when Sora and Riku got back together. I love this story! you guys are amazing writers!!
xforalways
2008-07-17
ch 5,
abuseNOO! Why couldn't you have told me! ARGH! Now i'm going to have to wonder until the next update! But sora can't have it! the last one had to have been wrong!

I am decided, he doesn't have it. Now I just need proof..

:P Oh well. Until the next update,

~xforalways~
kestrel
2008-07-15
ch 5, anon.
abuseOh the suspense!! Has he got it or was it all a mistake?! Looking forward to the next (possibly last) chapter.
BlooShadowFox
2008-07-14
ch 5,
abuseOMG I AM SO SAD I AM ON THE BRINK OF TEARS... TEARS! TT_TT
Smiley Smackdown
2008-07-12
ch 5,
abuse-_-GASPS! does he hve hiv or not? such suspense! please update soon!-_-
Innocent KH
2008-07-12
ch 5,
abuseomg that was so intense! u cant just leave us like this! i hope he doesnt have HIV. sersly i was just ready to cry, my throat was chokeed and everything, and all i get is "and...?". And to think i was scrolling down the page ever so slowly so i wouldnt spoil it for myself...ah..well i'll just have to wait and see what happens.
anyways, this story is really really great. i cant wait to see what happens though! hehehehehehe...ok its not even funny...this is some seroius stuff and me no like it. sniff sniff. Nah that will be a lie. i love dramtic stuff ONLY if through all the angst and pain there is A VERY happy ending *hint hint* hehehehehe...
great story...u r great writers...the both of u =) oh and sorry for my splling..hehehe
C3LLO
2008-07-12
ch 2,
abuseI almost cried a bit. How Axel how the HIVs, Sora telling Roxas his problems, & when Sora & Riku were talkingn to each other. You really bring out the emotions.

But I am so mad at Riku right now. I love him, but I feel like killing him. #=_=

Keep up the good work. :'D
Lost Kin
2008-07-12
ch 5,
abusesuch a big cliffie up date soon.
dark and light heart
2008-07-11
ch 5,
abusewhat a horrible spot to end i am so mad but love it update soon.
StefanXSorenForever
2008-07-11
ch 5,
abuseYou must continue!
Valentined
2008-07-11
ch 5,
abuseAt such a frustrating cliffhanger such at this, I can only grin. x)
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