hm. I like this. It's interesting & written well. The drama isn't in the dialogue, and I like that. It's a good departure from a lot of other-well, most other-fanfics.

Oh My God! The ending. That was so, SO very unexpected. (I am a closet Dizzie fan, just because they're kinda deliciously imperfect.) but this was amazing. I love how you panned out their life before and after the union, even in a one-shot. Something that is pretty difficult to do. And also I loved the intensity of the story, because you can TELL that they want each other so much, but they're so not-willing to change the equilibrium, so it remains unacknowledged. Kudos to you!

No way! He's getting married to Lizzie!
Good fic though a little confusing in parts but other then that it was great

(Feels like crying) How could you make Derek and Lizzie be together! (Trying to hold back tears) That was a horrible thing to do to Dasey! OMG I'm going to cry! It was really really good thought so just...keep writing then!
Person Of A Strange Origin

awsome job, u should write a sequal or epiloge after the wedding involving a little edwin/casey, but lots of dasey

This is really good. And I'm not sugar-coating it. I really like this. It's confusing, but at the same time explains some of the loose ends. I love stories like this.

You're an awesome author, and I love reading your stories.

loved it update soon

Wow ! I never expected that ending ! I'm pretty sure I've got it : Casey and Derek are in love, and Edwin's in love with Lizzie, but Derek and Lizzie are getting married. Again, wow ! This was really well written. I loved it ! Parts were slightly confusing, but once you see how it ends it all clicks. It's great ! ( and that's the honest truth !)

oh my god, that was so tragic!! and why did it have to be lizzie, couldnt it have been anyone else... but i did enjoy the story, but they should have objected and run away together!!

I wish I could say anything about the story, but once I read it I became speachless.
Ugh, I really have nothing to say, it was beautifully written and the ending completely made my heart stop. My mouth just flew open.
I loved it, it made me think so much and I had to scroll up to read it again just to make sure what I read at the end was right.
An amazing story, I honestly have nothing bad to say about it :)

I liked how you explained the evolution of their relationship, and how Casey goes back into her journal to see what's different- that was really cool.

And I liked how we didn't really know who was getting married until the end- very clever!

This is really good. The only criticism I have is that the paragraph that starts "So now here I am" was a little confusing, maybe it was the punctuation, but all the fake smiling tripped me up a little- is it Lizzie he's been in love with for 5 years? or is he talkig about Derek being in love with Casey? But that could just be me getting confused. So yeah, good job- while it's totally sad and ends on such a down note, it's really powerful and heartbreaking.

WOW! And as my daughter would put it, oh my freakin' gosh! I did not see that ending coming. I seriously read the paragraph that start's 'So now here I am.' three times before I finished the story because I just kept thinking, did I miss something?

You really made us think and what a different take on Dasey. Good job!

okay, okay. i think i've got it. it IS about casey and derek in the beginning and all they've been through and they love each other and what not...but he's getting married to lizzie.
wow. i love how you made us think it was casey he was getting married to...then BAM! it's not.
it's not that it was confusing...it just takes some pondering to get it.
and THAT's my honest review! i honestly loved it. [not trying to "sugar-coat" this.]
awesome job!! :]

I love that! seriously.. Ive always had a random place in my heart for derek/lizzie. hehe but this was so different. If only they knew how Lizzie felt.. then if she loved edwin they could all be happy. oh well... it was still really awesome! great job!!

OMG! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT! my mouth just dropped and i actually said omg out loud...i wasnt expecting that at all! i thought casey was getting married! and i thought that edwin was in love with casey then the end came and i wals ike woah! i loved it! this is my favorite one