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Reviews for: 10 moments with Riza and Sciezska
The-Jaron
2008-06-06 . chapter 7
that was kind of funny

the last bit made me smile the most

although, hawkeye seems out of character

oh well, you did say

Jaron out

P.S Good luck at you're new school
The-Jaron
2008-04-22 . chapter 6
nice little oneshot

a bit saddening, but still, nice

and last line is sweet, but u need more of those one liners spread out over 5 lines



Jaron out
The-Jaron
2008-04-13 . chapter 5
lol

the last sentance made me laugh and want to watch that episode all over again


hehehe

nice sweet chapter

Jaron out
The-Jaron
2008-04-08 . chapter 4
soo

nice little bit o' fluff here

is this based off the manga or the anime?

cause hawkeyes tattoo is in the manga only

and the new description is a better description, more fitting as you would say


Jaron out

P.S. hope for the next chapter to be using sciezskas newfound alchemic prowess
The-Jaron
2008-04-01 . chapter 3
cool

but i wouldnt call them 10 one shots

maybe 10 chapters of a non-chronological story?

I dunno

Jaron out
The Flaming Bitch Alchemist
2008-03-20 . chapter 2
Haha! These are great! I look forward to reading more.
The-Jaron
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
wow first time ive ever seen that fic

well a fic with that pairing

btw

keep it M dont want to dampen the steaminess now
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