Nice chapters, Lozzie. Even though I am a G/E shipper, but I still enjoyed reading your story about our favorite detectives ^_^

I'm starting to like CI.Especially how Bobby and Alex act with each other.I admire Alex standing by Bobby even though he probably ** her off sometimes.

This was fantastic- I think I've read it about five times as it's been reworked and added to. I especially love the language and the writing- wonderful.

one of the greatest lines i've ever read: "eames went dusting for Goren's prints on her heart, but got only partial matches." incredible! i must admit, i still have a lot of curiosity about this and would love to see a chapter 4. i can understand their ambivalence about continuing down that path because they both yearn for and yet are afraid of intimacy. bobby thinks he wants things to be "normal" again, but they can't go back. you can never go back in a relationship. they will always have what happened between them. i think it's really cool that bobby wanted another chance, so he could do it better. that's a little window on his heart: he wanted to make something really good happen for her, for them together. they can have something very special if they step forward instead of trying to find their way backward. i say go for it!

Congratulations, I liked your fics much, I can even tell you I have some envy (I can not reflect the feelings, as your) in my country have not released the chapter, but please after I see it decides your fics

I am Chilean, sorry for my English

lovely. this in particular -

Knowing this, Eames went dusting for Goren's prints on her heart, but got only partial matches.

was an unexpected gem. and there were so many other good moments. you have the descriptions down, and the way they think down. and it's just like her to send him off to the library and just like him to take that ball and run with it. loved the line in the second chapter about "really, mr goren." funny and touching and totally wonderful from where i sit in my BA ship chair. the ending is a little sad, but totally them.

i think your writing works better when you don't declare POV ahead of time, as you do in the first chapter of this story. you have a tendency to switch back and forth abruptly, which is ok. i think as you write more and become more confident the slight unevenness that occurs when you switch suddenly will even itself out.

all in all, very nicely done!

Oh no, they don't have to stop now! *sigh*

"Knowing this, Eames went dusting for Goren's prints on her heart, but got only partial matches." awesome line!

Nice chapter. I loved it. I love how they understand each other so well even without words. Post more soon.

I really enjoyed this chapter. Bobby is playful and delightful. I loved the kisses in the library. "Well REALLY, Mr. Goren." Great line.

i really am enjoying this story. both chapters are emotionally rich -- deep into the characters and their complexities. i am fascinated with their explorations of the physical and emotional boundaries in their relationship. everything is changing for them, but it is a natural evolution prompted by their traumatic experiences. and i think the changes are terrific for them.

To borrow a favorite phrase from Star Trek "Fascinating" is the only way to describe my reaction to this story. I couldn't leave it alone, though I was offended by the way you portrayed Ross's character (My reaction so my problem not yours. His character is a favorite of mine.)but I liked the way you portrayed Eames and Gorens reactions to each other. And the librarians was good. The Chief was right on, except he'd have to be more formal in the hearing, but that's just a professional thing. I'm sorry, I'm being too critical. I would read it if there were more to it. I'm easily swayed at midnight. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I hope I haven't offended you too greatly.

Bobby took a big chance doing that. Eames may have shot him. Sometimes we just have to let things out to get a clear view of what we are going through. How long will it take Bobby to become a Detective First Grade? I don't like him being demoted.

This is beautiful writing. I especially love this passage:

"Goren's voice grows wings and begins to fly somewhere over her very, very tired head, all the higher tones being absorbed by the ages of cardboard and paper and leather in the shelves around them. It starts to feel to Eames that the green-shaded reading lamp on the table is the only light left in the world, in the universe; it is illuminating Goren's fingers - pale and far too elegant, really - as they fondle and play with the pages of his books."

And I am a G/E shipper, so I can appreciate it on that level as well. :)

Please write more!

Fine work, post more soon.