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jessicats
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Really beuatifully written. Does not suck!
Silver Sailor Ganymede
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
I liked this drabble. It shows a rather more serious side to Sirius, and I think it works - after all, who'd expect him to see the point of Christmas, coming from a family like his? Nice work.
Unashamed1
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Ok, I'll review...

I just wanted to complement you on giving us a slightly different Sirius here--normally, he comes off as a bit of a bafoon in these fics, but you showed us a more somber side to our favorite dog. Very nice.
Rose of the West
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
Interesting.

This gives a sense of isolation that Sirius must have felt even before he was arrested.
Mary Gooby
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
I don't think it sucks! In case you haven't noticed, I'm reading all your stories because I'm bored.
Frayed Misfit
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
The last line was so beautiful and once again the connection you make between things is so clever and oustanding, like Sirius being Black and then the white snowfall.

I love that he is angry at James and Lily's hapiness, I love that Remus gives him 'that' look and is possibly the only one who understands what is going through his mind. And most of all I love how you have expressed so much in so few words; so much anger and repressed grief and also love.

Merry Christmas!

- Fray xx
Bad Mum
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
Doesn't suck, isn't pointless. A bit bleak, but very Sirius...
Gaby Black
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
Aww this was lovely & sad. I liked it! Especially: Lily laughs at some ridiculously not funny joke James told her, both the slightest bit drunk on eggnog, and he wants to scream at her and tell her that it’s just not funny and how could anything be funny when there is a fucking war going on just outside their door?
- Gaby
xRosePetalx
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
That was really interesting. Now that you have said it, it seems obvious that Sirius wouldn't like Christmas, which to him is yet another dismal reminder of the family that didn't care. Great job!
xLupinxLoverx
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
You do not suck, this is much better than anything I could ever write!

Aw, poor Sirius, being the serious one (no pun intended ;])
I loved the last line, ''Christmas is always black for Sirius, no matter how much snowfall comes to pass''

Sophie xD x
A Shade of Grey
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Gotta love angsty!Sirius. ;)

I like how his Christmases aren't perfect, even when Lily and James are alive, and how he's the one thinking most seriously about the war; it makes for a nice change.
Cuban Sombrero Gal
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
*squee*
Another dramatic/angsty Sirius for me to drool over. I really adore this, his jealousy of people with the perfect life is definately something that's not touched on enough. =)

-Kahlia xx
xscarredforlifex
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Aww poor Sirius! I can't imagine he'd ever like Christmas after an upbringing like his,he must've hated it =(
Wait-For-Sleep
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Did you ACTUALLY just ask me if this sucked??

SHUN YOUR STUPIDY. This so does not suck. This is frecking great. I love your stuff like this, your fics/ficlets/drabbles/drabblets win hands down.

Keep it up XD
bonniedoll
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Am I... your *first* reviewer? I don't think that's ever happened before... XD

Aw! Not your best, but I love it all the same. :) My favourite line was, "let them celebrate this dead, pointless holiday", because I liked that he thought that Christmas was dead... because I'm jusr morbid like that... ^_^ Very cute!
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