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| thekiller00 2008-09-01 ch 31,  | abuseWOW ! That was a great ending ! |
| rapunzl 2008-08-14 ch 31, | abuseNice wrap up. Clark has surprisingly regained his memories as Superman (or at least is faking it enough to remember to wear the costume ;) ), Lois has accepted his proposal for a new relationship, and the Planet is looking to be rebuilt. I'm interested to know if you'd be willing to do a sequel/parallel to this story, but set in season 2. After Clark is killed by Al Capone's gang, I'd be curious to see your take on "A World Without Clark Kent." ;) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-14 ch 30, | abuseWow. Didn't expect that one. You're really not pulling any punches. Good for you! |
| rapunzl 2008-08-14 ch 28, | abuseWow. Poor Jack - killed off because there was no Superman. And Clark has taken his place as the scapegoat. Nice twist with the attempts on Clark's life in jail. For a minute, you had me convinced that Lex sprinkled kryptonite into his food!! :) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-13 ch 25, | abuseWow. If there's anything that will bring back his memories and instincts, it's saving Lois. Good call. |
| rapunzl 2008-08-13 ch 18, | abuseWow - nice twist on the ledge issue! So it looks like he is using his slowly returning powers, even if he doesn't know it! Great job on this, and adding in Lex's help so Clark wouldn't have to fly across the U.S. to install the patch. ;) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-13 ch 17, | abuseInteresting that Clark still used the ledge to hide them. I wonder how they both fit - it looked like a tight squeeze on the show, even with Clark hovering! :) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 11, | abuseOh... I sense a plot twist coming. I love how you change the plot just enough so that it's not just watching the show again. |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 10, | abuseWow! Nice twist on this episode, and still managing to have Clark save the rain forest (without having to fly all the way down there himself). And little Jimmy gets to be the hero for once. :) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 9, | abuseI've been mentally running through this episode ever since I read Winninger's name, and you are doing a fabulous job of retelling it. And you shot Clark! :0 I love this story. :D |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 7, | abuseWow. *sniffle* Even knowing that Superman was clearly not dead, this brought tears to my eyes. Wow. You're quite amazing at this. |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 6, | abuseNice job writing Friskin back into the universe. I liked her, too. I was curious why she asked him to describe such a harrowing experience in Superman's point of view... maybe she's smarter than she lets on... :) |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 5, | abuseAh! The possible foreshadowing here is so tempting! Why do I get the feeling that our gentle hero is going to be driven mad soon enough? :) I'm truly enjoying this story - enough that I cannot put it down! |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 4, | abuseWow. Nice insertion of a background for Mrs. Cox. And Clark's instinctual drawing away from the kryptonite was well played. It does make me wonder why Luthor would insist on putting kryptonite on a Superman statue, though... especially since Superman normally wouldn't be anywhere near it... |
| rapunzl 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWhat an interesting twist on this episode. I had never considered the composition of the asteroid as having an effect on Superman. Very creative! I'm very interested to see where this goes. |